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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Nov 04, 2025

To:Orionless

I completely get it. I feel this work is in need of a full-blown revision. I planned to do a romance story anyway, but considering things are clicking way better there than here, I'll likely prioritize that one. This one I just feel the prompt's underlying rules are too constricting. I'm not having fun writing this, and it's basically Wind Sniper 2.0 at this point, likely worse, since Wind Sniper I did enjoy writing to some degree and only got screwed with it due to not being able to think of a plotline that didn't lead to it crossing over with another work. Regardless, I thank you for reading and giving your feedback. If I'm able to come back and revise this story in time, I'll let you know.

Misfits of the Magic World

Chapter:4

Nov 04, 2025

To:Orionless

Streamer edgelord waifus. Technically not lying with this one. Ever since Life Stream, I just can't help having streamer girls in my stories.

Why the hell is everyone crying!?

Chapter:1

Nov 04, 2025

To:Taylor J

I'm really glad you like him so much. That makes me feel good that I added him to the cover before the deadline so all know of his glory. He really is a fun little guy to write and read about.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:28

Nov 04, 2025

To:Taylor J

Sana is milf of the year.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:27

Nov 04, 2025

So who's in the suit?

Wadakoi - A Ridiculous Love That Will Kill Me Someday

Chapter:13

Nov 04, 2025

To:SkeletonIdiot

I guess that does fall into the game-category of isekai. But I will confirm that this world is in fact real.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:33

Nov 03, 2025

To:Sammi9519

I had the same issue. Sometimes the site just gets a little wonky.

Hazel's first highschool group project

Chapter:4

Nov 03, 2025

Author's Commentary #612:

Time to talk about the finale of Side Story 8, Chapter 612: The milf, the ghost, and the 9-queen conspiracy.

I just can't help forcing myself down the Mimoko Tanabe rabbit hole. Nor can I resist shaving a hot milf bald and browless. And speaking of the milf, lets do her bio.

ルーペ・ジャウマンドル (Lupe Jaumandre) is how Lupe's name would be spelled in katakana.

Her birthday is November 5th. I chose this date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is her birthday.

Her favorite piece is the queen.

Originally, her and Kurumi were to debut in Season 7 and get shaved bald for 6B. The latter didn't happen since I wanted to keep the teams orderly. And since I wanted to just get done with Season 7, I didn't bother slotting them or any of their teammates into the story. I also wanted to try and have them get more fleshed out in Season 9, but that sure didn't happen. At least now the two have proper personalities.

As for the series, we'll be starting with character profiles and brief backstory summaries for the side characters. There will likely be another Side Story or two before the end of the month though.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:612

Nov 03, 2025

To:Sammi9519

Hopefully it'll be more on the lighter side.

Why the hell is everyone crying!?

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2025

Heather, you sure he misspoke? Anyway, this was a nice little short story. Really enjoyed reading it.

Hazel's first highschool group project

Chapter:4

Nov 03, 2025

Vampire sasquatch. That's all I can think of from reading the last few lines.

Hazel's first highschool group project

Chapter:3

Nov 03, 2025

Ah, there's the monthly talisman theme.

Hazel's first highschool group project

Chapter:2

Nov 03, 2025

To:Sammi9519

I'm glad you enjoy Hagemi so much. Her personality is easily one of the more memorable ones in the series. For her first match, I wanted to showcase both her prowess and more on Gyro's personality. And speaking of personality, the next chapter will mark the start of the tournament and introduce quite a few new characters. I'm very curious to see how you'll feel about them.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:23

Nov 03, 2025

To:Sammi9519

Thanks for checking this out. That pretty much sums up Diana. It'll be funny to see how she handles her investigation of the crying.

Why the hell is everyone crying!?

Chapter:1

Nov 02, 2025

To:kazesenken

I feel maybe this prompt in particular is stressing me more than it should. But thanks for your insights. I honestly feel this is a tad soulless myself, but I'll try to improve it. Or at worst, stick with my backup plan and go all-in on romance as with that one, I feel I've got a much stronger idea.

Misfits of the Magic World

Chapter:4

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