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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

registered at: Jun 30, 2023

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Feb 06, 2026

Love the diving art. Please do more illustrations.

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:75

Feb 06, 2026

To:Anime lover

At the start of every dialogue.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:45

Feb 06, 2026

Noticed a lot of capitalization errors in this one. Anyway, I'm all caught up.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:45

Feb 06, 2026

Well that got dark with Samantha's family.

Hazel the mentor

Chapter:4

Feb 06, 2026

To:Anime lover

Everything here is spaced out way too much. The gaps between paragraphs is too much.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:40

Feb 05, 2026

Since you asked for thoughts on the future arc, I'll give you some critique. Throughout most of it, I was confused. Time travel shenanigans are generally frowned upon because they can get confusing if not pulled off right, which sadly I feel is the case here. The other thing I feel wasn't explained well was Hanz's monologues about Shu. That, and there was also numerous formatting issues. Needless to say, if you want to make this work, you'll have a lot of revising ahead of you.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:44

Feb 05, 2026

Well that was a sudden transition.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:43

Feb 05, 2026

So Hannah's real name is Khali?

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:42

Feb 05, 2026

Really good fight scenes here.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:41

Feb 05, 2026

The formatting really ruined the experience here for me, which is a shame since this is a battle chapter.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:40

Feb 05, 2026

So could Eryn get a crit increase?

Atk 0 Crit All ~My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical hits to succeed!~

Chapter:5

Feb 05, 2026

At least he's able to control the power for now.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:39

Feb 05, 2026

Guess End of Future arc Part 2 will come a bit later.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:38

Feb 05, 2026

Even though this is one of your earlier works, I'm really enjoying how you approached the perspective change from 1st to 3rd person along with how you used single quotes to illustrate thoughts.

Atk 0 Crit All ~My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical hits to succeed!~

Chapter:4

Feb 05, 2026

Guess the future arc is coming to a close soon.

Final Chapter: POST FUTURE SAGA

Chapter:37

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