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registered at: Aug 13, 2020

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Sep 17, 2026

"I have a family, and I'm (home.)" - Ui really Stevenuniverse'd it, hasn't she?

Flowers on the Battlefield

Chapter:3

Sep 17, 2026

I like to imagine this little girl Archimedesing it to her parents.

Flowers on the Battlefield

Chapter:2

Sep 17, 2026

I, too, like Megumining myself so someone Kazumas me.

Flowers on the Battlefield

Chapter:1

Sep 17, 2026

This isn't for me, so no point giving you feedback. Best of luck in the contest!

Solveig the Great: I Defeated the Demon King, But If I Feel Insufficient I’ll Explode?!

Chapter:2

Sep 17, 2026

nyo

Solveig the Great: I Defeated the Demon King, But If I Feel Insufficient I’ll Explode?!

Chapter:1

Sep 17, 2026

How does an emperor despatch a royal decree? Surely, it would be *imperial*. Tsk tsk.

Solveig the Great: I Defeated the Demon King, But If I Feel Insufficient I’ll Explode?!

Chapter:0

Aug 09, 2026

It's interesting that Freydis seems like the Red Bear. This reveal, however, feels a little cheap seeing as it's both set up and delivered in the span of 1,000 words. I feel like the beginning does a good job of setting up the atmosphere, but it suffers from a bit of a grounding issue. I understand you're trying to show not tell, but that's usually okay to do in the opening paragraphs if only to allow the reader some hooks to interpret the world. Sure I understand the gist of it, a company of soldiers has been sent to the far north to kill this mystical bear, but I don't know much about their origin or the specifics of their missions. As a result, a lot of the exposition delivered via dialogue falls a bit flat. Still, the reveal at the end is enough to hook a reader, so you got that going for you which is nice.

The World's Greatest Saint is NOT the Heroine

Chapter:0

Aug 09, 2026

Ominous and foreboding. I am also afraid of this kid who will dig into a wintry ass mud road to bury a dead bird.

The Company of Small Dying Things

Chapter:1

Aug 08, 2026

To:lolitroy

i wanna read goodfic

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:4

Aug 08, 2026

she should find a girlfriend instead (me)

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:4

Aug 08, 2026

I wish pebble would unite with me

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:3

Aug 06, 2026

too many exclamation marks stop quirkmaxxing

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:10

Aug 03, 2026

gay

A Crown of Filial Sin

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2026

Dun dun dun. May Uric haunt Leo till his dying breath.

Invictus: Champion of Defiance in a Game of Gods

Chapter:2

Aug 01, 2026

Row, row, fight the powah

Invictus: Champion of Defiance in a Game of Gods

Chapter:1

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