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Nov 01, 2025

I am lowkey confused by this chapter. Not two paragraphs ago, Lian just lied about his power. Then he did... I'll be honest, I have no clue what he did to that demon, or why the three of them were even here to begin with. Then he's suddenly fine revealing it to the world?

Also, I feel like for the past couple of chapters you've really started ditching the setup phase of your chapters. In the earlier, and I assume, more polished chapters, there was a distinct ebb into the narrative, silly and sudden as it might've been. But now, it feels like I'm just jerked into it like the reverse of waking from a nightmare.

A True Hero's form

Chapter:17

Nov 01, 2025

Are you... typing the chapters as Discord messages to yourself...? Why is the italics formatting the same as Discord's (or well, any) markdown...

Also banger power. He is now Anya, nod nod.

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Chapter:16

Nov 01, 2025

Ngl, this felt like a scene introduced here just for the sake of the rule of threes. I get it's meant to be funny, but it also feels kind of inconsequential with it being this short *and* effortless.

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Chapter:15

Nov 01, 2025

Kiiinda weird for the narrator to introduce Morwen by her first name to the reader, whilst she introduces herself to the perspective characters at a later time.

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Chapter:14

Nov 01, 2025

And the chapter ended there.

Squeezing it out of you.

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Chapter:13

Nov 01, 2025

Man's gift is a +2 on every perception check.

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Chapter:11

Nov 01, 2025

Some banging bars in here. Neither of you is wrong enough to be right alone. Cold.

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Chapter:10

Nov 01, 2025

Hmm. Interesting POV change. We've only been following Lian so far, but it looks like we're dipping a little into Kael too.

Another thing I feel is a little odd here, though the brisk and earnest quality of the writing masks it more often than not, is how I feel like we're skipping a bit of the connective tissue between the characters. For example, Mira and Kael had known each other for a total of 4 chapters and, what, just as many days at this point? So for Kael to so readily say something like 'you don't usually do X' makes it feel like something's been cut from the narrative or it's been noted in such a blink-and-you'll-miss-it way that I did just that.

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Chapter:9

Nov 01, 2025

Another cute moment. Love the little interactions these 3 goobers have so much.

That being said, I'm a little bit confused about something: the beginning set up a promise for some kind of conventional plot. But so far, 8 chapters in and we've kinda been gallivanting around...

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Chapter:8

Nov 01, 2025

Banger chapter. I love how we've only met the benign, even if arrogant kind of heroes, or our kind-hearted protagonists. But here we actually get to see how big of an asshole a 'true' hero is. Good job Luce~

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Chapter:7

Nov 01, 2025

Tbh, I get this is an isekai, and a shounen, and a bit of an unserious moment, but Lian lapsing into a cheesy inner monologue said out loud kinda took me out a little. I feel like if it had been a little shorter and/or less of it was actually spoken, it would've hit a little better.

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Chapter:6

Nov 01, 2025

We're so back, boys.

I absolutely LOVE Kael. She's so silly as this kind of mixture of Megumin (KonoSuba) and Jinx (LoL) and I think her introduction, random and explosive as it has been, is perfect here. She's all the spunk and moxie this party needed and I foresee that she'll be a good foil to Lian and Mira.

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Chapter:5

Oct 30, 2025

Saltpepper... Saltpetre?

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Chapter:36

Oct 30, 2025

Begging you to tell me if you meant 'terrace' instead of 'terrence.'

Tales from Zemliharos: Night of The Striga

Chapter:27

Oct 27, 2025

Roll credits! (Again)

Dammit, not ANOTHER Isekai!

Chapter:4

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