Chapter 1:


Wreaking Vengeance

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“People always question what happens in the afterlife, will the world end in chaos? how evolutionized will the human race ever be? Are heaven and hell waiting for us the afterlife? But most importantly, Does God exist?” These were the heading questions of Louie’s project in his first-year of high-school. He will be graduating in three year as part of the class of 2000. Louie Elmor, a 16-year-old boy who lives with his foster parents, James and Yara Elmor. According to Elmor’s parents, Louie was found an infant on their front door on a rainy day in September 1983. Given that the family could not bear children, they decided to adopt Louie and granted him their last name. Bookmark here

“When humans turn exactly 18 years old, from the time of their sperm and egg fertilize, a 5-triangle mark (/\/\/\/\/\) starts into taking shape on their upper chests, right upon their hearts,” said Dr Henry, a clinical embryologist on the radio. Bookmark here

- Louie: Hey mom, I can’t wait to know my exact birthdayBookmark here

- She patted his head and hugged him with a tearing smile: yes, baby, you grew up so fast.Bookmark here

- Louie: Don’t worry mom, no matter how old I get, I will always visit and ask for your delicious pasta.Bookmark here

Louie ‘s project’s presentation day arrived. He pulled an all-nighter for preparation. He then had a refreshing shower, dressed up smart, tucked his fine suit and went to school. As he was passing down the street, he sensed a shadow that seemed to be following him. He turned his head to find nothing but an empty street. “I guess I am tired after all yesterday’s preparation” Louie thoughtBookmark here

- Elizabeth: Hey Louie ‼.Bookmark here

- Louie: Good morning Elizabeth, how are you doing?Bookmark here

- Elizabeth smiled and said: Couldn’t be better. How is your presentation going on?Bookmark here

- Louie: Well, I am not sure, to be honest. I pulled an all-nighter yesterday preparing. I hope that doesn’t affect my performance today.Bookmark here

- Elizabeth: Don’t worry, Louie, you are a straight-A student with perfect scores on all your subject, I trust you will do well.Bookmark here

- Louie: Thank you, Akasuki, you’ve always been cheering me up ever since we were in grade school, I hope I always live up to your expectations.” Bookmark here

“For the longest time, humans were evolving both physically and mentally. We either lost parts of our bodies that were deemed unnecessary by natural selection or became more intellectually developed in terms of our politics and legalities. With all our advances in society, we still have not acknowledged the afterlife.” Louie concluded his presentation elegantly and received a big applaud from his class and teacher. “Bookmark here

- Elizabeth: That was a great presentation, LouieBookmark here

- Garen: Hey Louie, you have been amazing. Still, I bet my project is going to surpass yours easily Bookmark here

Once again Garen has lost to Louie. Louie’s best friends were Elizabeth and Garen. Louie knew Elizabeth ever since third grade; she is known for being kind, altruistic and supportive. Garen was Louie’s rival and his trusting friend. They have always competed in everything and anything, from sports to grades; however, Louie used to always win and surpass Garen. In fact, Louie never lost to Garen or to the rest of his class in any kind of competition. Bookmark here

Louie’s classes ended, and they left school with Elizabeth and Garen, as usual. Another shiver went down upon Louie's spine, followed by a loud sneeze. Bookmark here

- Garen: ARE YOU OKAY?” Bookmark here

- Louie: I am fine. I didn’t sleep well yesterday.Bookmark here

- Garen: well, I guess you can get sick as the rest of us after allBookmark here

Louie then arrived home Bookmark here

- Louie: I am home. Bookmark here

- Mom Yara: Louie, the dinner is ready.Bookmark here

The family sat down and started eating their dinner, pasta with meatballs. Bookmark here

- Dad James: how was your day at school, Louie?Bookmark here

- Louie: It was a good dad. I aced my project as usual and got an effortless A.Bookmark here

- Dad: Well, done, Louie, I trust you will make it as valedictorian this year again. Bookmark here

- Louie: Hopefully, dadBookmark here

- Mom: You seem to be enjoying the food Louie.Bookmark here

- Louie: Yes mom, Can I have another plate?Bookmark here

- Mom: No darling, this is your fifth dish, and you need to stop eating a lot. It’s unhealthy.Bookmark here

- Louie: But mom, I am still hungry, also I never gain weight or showed any sign of obesity before, please one final plate.Bookmark here

- Dad: Honey, give him this one last dish.Bookmark here

- Mom: Alright, that will be your final dish, then you will go to sleep”Bookmark here

- Louie: Thank you, mom, and dad.Bookmark here

Louie was done eating; he brushed his teeth and went to bed. Bookmark here

- Mom: Good evening Louie.Bookmark here

- Louie: Good evening, MomBookmark here

- Louie: Mom…. Can I ask you a question?Bookmark here

- Mom: yes, darling Bookmark here

- Louie: when do you think my birthmark will appear?Bookmark here

- Mom: I don’t know Louie, but definitely this year.Bookmark here

- Louie: What if it doesn’t?Bookmark here

- Mom: Well, that’s impossible, darling. This birthmark represents your generation. Each tip of the triangle represents one generation, and as we evolve, another triangle comes in the shape. Bookmark here

- Louie: Mmm, when does the next triangle appear?Bookmark here

- Mom: A Triangle appears every 2000 years, darling, and with the first child that is born with the sixth triangle, a new generation begins, and the calendar resets to year 0 with the generation named after that first child.Bookmark here

- Louie: Does that mean the year will reset within three year?Bookmark here

- Mom: Yes, and the calendar will reset after.Bookmark here

- Louie: Mmmm, what are the names of the previous generations, mom?Bookmark here

- Mom: Generation Adam, Generation Noah, Generation Laila, Generation Haruto and our current generation, Generation Melissa, and that’s in order.Bookmark here

- Louie: Interesting. Do you think my child will acquire the sixth triangle?Bookmark here

- Mom jokingly said with a laugh: are you planning to get married after three year?Bookmark here

- Louie: maybeBookmark here

- Mom: Well. It is getting late…so good night Bookmark here

- Louie: Good nightBookmark here

As Louie was going to sleep, he sensed a shadow watching through the window. He nervously ran to open the window “is anyone here?!”. No one replied, so Louie went back to his bed and sleptBookmark here

Upcoming scene is a set of slide showsBookmark here

POV: ~picture of lava everywhere~ eyes closed ~ an intense light is directed at your face ~Bookmark here

Louie: what is this intense light‼Bookmark here

Female voice: NOO! PLEASE DON’T ‼ LEAVE US ALONE‼‼Bookmark here

Female panting voice: we need to hurry! We don’t have much timeBookmark here

POV: ~Being carried by someone, their face is so blurry, the person is running~Bookmark here

Louie: what? Who is this? Bookmark here

POV: ~ Knife being stabbed into someone ~ eyes closed ~ Blue intense explosion, dust everywhere ~Bookmark here

Louie woke up panting, panicking, and vomitingBookmark here

Louie: it’s the same exact dream, again and again Bookmark here

Louie started his next day. He showered, brushed his teeth, ate breakfast, and went to school. On his way, he met Elizabeth.Bookmark here

- Elizabeth: Louie why do you seem so pale? Bookmark here

- Louie: I have had this nightmare over and over again.Bookmark here

- Elizabeth: Nightmare? What nightmare?Bookmark here

- Louie: I don’t know, Lava, Blue explosions, an intense light, and murder...Bookmark here

- Elizabeth smiles: Ohhh Louie, you need to grab a blanket or something; you must be cold to have these nightmares….Bookmark here

As they were walking to school, Garen appeared...Bookmark here

- Garen: Hey guys‼ did you see the newspaper! They are releasing a phone with a camera that takes high-quality pictures. Not to mention, you can call anyone from anywhere as well.Bookmark here

- Elizabeth: Ohh this is so cool. Bookmark here

- Louie: let me read the newspaper.Bookmark here

Garen handed the newspaper to Louie. As Louie turned his eye upon the advertisement, “a portable phone that can take high-quality pictures. You can also call from any part of the world”, suddenly, Lui’s heart started racing. He clenched his chest and began vomiting and panting.Bookmark here

- Garen: Louie‼ ARE YOU OK ‼‼‼‼Bookmark here

- Elizabeth: LUIIIIIIIIII! SOMEBODY HELP US‼‼‼Bookmark here

Louie was then taken to the hospital. He woke up and found himself in a bad in front of his mom and a doctorBookmark here

- Mom panicking: Please, doctor, what happened to Lui?Bookmark here

- Doctor: apparently, he suffered from a nervous breakdownBookmark here

- Mom: But why?Bookmark here

- Doctor: we need to look up the triggers of this nervous breakdown…. Oh, Lui, you woke up; how are you doing?Bookmark here

- Louie: I…am ….. so tired…. where …I am?Bookmark here

- Doctor: you are in a hospital; you had a nervous breakdown. Do you remember the last thing you saw?Bookmark here

- Louie: The…The newspaperBookmark here

- Doctor: The newspaper? Bookmark here

The doctor leaned to the couch beside the bed to grab a newspaper thereBookmark here

- Doctor: Do you mean this?Bookmark here

- Louie: yesBookmark here

- Doctor: Mmmmm, I can’t see any kind of reaction or trigger. Do you remember what you did before that or after that Bookmark here

- Lui: I… I don’t remember Bookmark here

- Doctor: Alright, Mrs. Elmor, we need to hear more from his friends who were there with him. As for now Lui, I want you to rest; you will spend your night here in the hospitalBookmark here

- Lui: Mom… I alright?Bookmark here

- Mom held his hands and pet his head in tears: yes, sweetie, don’t worry, the doctors will take good care of you.Bookmark here

At night as Louie is about to sleep, again, he senses a dark shadow watching through the ward’s windowBookmark here

- Louie screaming in bed: LEAVE ME ALONE!Bookmark here

Louie then goes to sleep Bookmark here

Upcoming scene is a set of slide showsBookmark here

POV: ~picture of lava everywhere~ eyes closed ~ an intense light is directed at your face ~Bookmark here

Louie: what is this intense light‼ STOP IT‼ I HATE THIS DREAMBookmark here

Female voice: NOO! PLEASE DON’T ‼ LEAVE US ALONE‼‼Bookmark here

Female panting voice: We need to hurry! We don’t have much time. Bookmark here

POV: ~Being carried, the face is so blurry, the person is running,~ you notice a three-triangle mark on their upper chest~Bookmark here

Louie: what? Who is this? Bookmark here

POV: ~ Knife being stabbed into someone ~ eyes closed ~ Blue intense explosion, dust everywhere ~Bookmark here

Louie woke up panting, panicking, and vomitingBookmark here

Louie: was that…. generation Laila? ‼ 4000 to 6000 years ago? ‼Bookmark here

To be continued....Bookmark here

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