The Prologue isn't actually finished yet, there are still some bits that I'd like to put some more detail in, but it is still readable.
Hopefully, you'll give Elementalist 44 a chance, give it a quick read and tell me your thoughts on how I can Improve.
Also, I am aware that I share the same first name as the protagonist of my novel, "Mk". Please pay no attention to it :)
It's not a self-insert.
Trust me on that.
If Mk Matsuda was real I'd fight him on sight.
You'll see why as we continue to the story.