Before you start reading Downcaster, I would like to state a few things, before you set on the journey of freedom and equality!
First off, there are tons of grammatical errors and continuation errors during the first chapter. You'll notice that Entz - the main character - is 14 at some point and 19 at the other! I would like to confirm that he is indeed 19.
Another tiny detail is the Morshan population, which is about 1.2 million people. So ignore that point in the speech on chap 7 or 8!
Finally, the prose is stiff throughout the first part, but I can assure you it got better at the end! Anyways that's it for me! Take care and enjoy reading.