The Moon That We Saw That Day

Akane Tsukishiro is ready to assist his first day of school. First year. He doesn't have much expectations about it. But, he has been constantly seeing this dream for a long time now.
He wakes up, and its raining heavily. Everything is dark. Everything is blurry.
But one of those dreams, led him through a road down his memories. The road was pitch black, and it was filled with what he once lived. What once caused him pain.
This time, at the end of the road, something was waiting for him.
A girl. A orange sunset, and his thoughts.
What are these dreams? Who is this girl?
This, is Akane's story. About the moon he saw that day.

This is the first time i'll be doing something public. Please point out every single thing that bothers you. It helps me grow.