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Nov 02, 2016
Fascinating start, I especially like the little details about what sets your depiction of ghosts apart from others.
Good start.
Good start! Be careful about exposition, some details are better revealed gradually, which is integral to good pacing. Still, your imagery was great! Keep up the good work!