lolitroy / Comments | Honeyfeed

lolitroy

I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

registered at: Aug 04, 2022

Roles

Author

Artist

Badge

silver

Achievement

What is an Achievement?

Report this user

Novels

Gallery

Comments

Reviews

aaa

Oct 13, 2025

the comment section of this fic is truly dead internet theory at its finest

Project M

Project M

Chapter:0

Oct 08, 2025

MY FIRST GLEEZY

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:1

Oct 05, 2025

To:Moon

powow remains unmatched sadly...

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:11

Oct 05, 2025

To:Moon

oops
tyty

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:7

Oct 03, 2025

To:Ashley

what do you want you bitchless harlot
attention
is that what you want

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:7

Oct 01, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

as expected from nakanogoat
see this ash*ey
cat_laugh

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:13

Oct 01, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

last time it was bears
I wonder what the next contest shtick will be

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:11

Oct 01, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

escaflowne yeah, it'll probably be the oldest (anime) reference out of all

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:6

Oct 01, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

theater kids isekai...

The Day "Ms. Perfect" Snapped and Tricked the Manga Club Into Going to Another World as Supporting Characters for her Chosen One Antics

Chapter:3

Oct 01, 2025

" "Sorry..", she giggled " broke me
I'll keep reading later

selena giggling and swapping feelings every 30 seconds seems jarringly out of character so guess I take back the personalityless accusation,,, kind of, she does cry a lot

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:19

Oct 01, 2025

the 'forgetting what you are' line is pretty nice but tf would she know if all their convos have been about the plot and/or fighting 😭

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:18

Oct 01, 2025

see there it is, multiple people talking and you outright go

he said,

"Thing"

literally why not just do

he said, "Thing."

also I feel like if you did a compilation of every time the title is dropped and they repeat that song poem thing you'd have 1 out of 64k

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:17

Oct 01, 2025

Agree with Eytha on this, it feels like the plot is controlling everyone like a puppet, though now I'm left wondering how much they trust the goddess and this complete rando to take decisions that could impact thousands, if not millions. It's no wonder they're getting clapped tbh

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:16

Oct 01, 2025

ngl it's hard to know who's talking sometimes because everyone talks the same and there's a lot of instances where dialogue is separated from the paragraph with action for some reason, so I have to reread to know what is happening. I'm pointing this out because it could be easily avoided by having paragraphs and dialogue in the same chonk, which you do anyway, so I'm not sure why there's so many instances where this isn't the case? It's even worse because a lot of the time, there's multiple people talking, and again, they all talk like the same person.

I also genuinely feel like some chapters weren't edited as well. There aren't typos, but a LOT of dialogue is "like this" instead of "like this.". One could make an argument about the lone dialogue strips being a stylistic choice, but this is grammatically wrong, plain and simple.

I feel like I've been chewing you out too much so to say some nice things, I liked the description of the city a lot, and not only because it has 'cake' in it. A city full of dark (?) elves (?) is also pretty based, and I genuinely feel like the king and queen showed more personality this chapter than everyone else combined before. That might be why this 'arc' has been my favorite so far.

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:15

Oct 01, 2025

really looking forward to the loredump
I never thought I'd say this but I'm AWAITING an infodump

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:12