Chapter 4:
The Last Look
A sudden bang reverberated through the warehouse walls, breaking the oppressive silence and jolting the girls from their lethargy. Screams and noises erupted from the area where the prisoners were confined; the sound of fists pounding against metal and voices filled with despair echoed like thunder in a stormy sky. The commotion quickly escalated, spreading panic like wildfire.
The soldiers, on high alert, exchanged hardened glances. They knew they needed to resolve the situation urgently, as the chief was about to arrive. In a coordinated and almost instinctive move, most of them rushed to contain the uprising, leaving only one soldier to guard the girls. He watched them with cold eyes, firmly holding his rifle, aware that they might attempt something. The tension in his shoulders betrayed that he was outnumbered.
The girls exchanged quick glances, their eyes reflecting the gravity of the situation. The distant commotion seemed to echo in their minds, but their focus remained on the lone soldier—the only obstacle between them and freedom.
Lina was the first to speak. “We have a chance now,” she whispered, her gaze fixed on the soldier guarding the group. “If we can take him down, we can escape through the metal hatch I found in the debris.”
Amira felt the weight of responsibility as she touched the pistol strapped to her waist. “I have this pistol, but it only has one bullet. We need to use it wisely. We can’t afford to miss.”
Yasmin, ever practical, frowned. “One bullet means we need to make sure he’s close enough so we don’t miss.”
Ayana, who had been quiet until now, suddenly leaned forward, an idea forming in her mind. “What if… we make him come to us? I can pretend to be sick, like I’m in pain or fainting. That might make him come over to check, since he’s the only guard now.”
The other girls exchanged looks, processing the plan.
“He doesn’t know we’re a serious threat,” Ayana continued, her voice low but determined. “If I fall to the ground and look vulnerable, he might let his guard down long enough for Amira to shoot.”
Lina looked at Ayana with concern. “That’s risky, Ayana. What if he doesn’t fall for the trick?”
“Then we’ll have to improvise,” Ayana replied, her determination unwavering. “But we have to try. It’s our best chance. If we just stay put, he’ll realize we’re plotting something. We need to act fast.”
Amira exchanged looks with Yasmin and Lina. They understood the risk, but the need to act outweighed any hesitation.
“Alright,” Amira finally agreed. “Let’s do it. But Ayana, you need to be convincing. We can’t raise any suspicion.”
Ayana nodded, feeling the weight of responsibility but also a glimmer of hope that, if everything went right, they would be one step closer to freedom.
“Let’s go then,” Lina said, casting one last glance at the soldier, who was distracted but still alert. “Get ready.”
With the decision made, the girls prepared to execute the plan, knowing that each movement had to be precise and coordinated.
Ayana took a deep breath, trying to calm her racing heart. She knew everything depended on her performance. She closed her eyes for a moment, gathering her courage, and then, with a deep sigh, allowed herself to collapse to the ground with a dull thud.
She writhed slightly, as if struggling against intense pain, and her groans echoed through the warehouse. Her hand went to her stomach, as if trying to hold back the pain, and her half-open eyes displayed an expression of weakness and suffering.
The soldier, who had been watching the girls from a distance, frowned as he saw Ayana crumple. For a moment, he hesitated, his eyes narrowing in suspicion. The scene seemed too dramatic, almost staged, and it put him on high alert.
“You’re up to something,” he murmured, taking a few steps closer. “You’ve never been sick before, and it just happens now? My only job is to keep you here until the chief arrives. If one of you is sick, then the others should take care of her.”
The tension in the air was palpable, as if the environment was on the brink of collapse. Lina bit her lip, exchanging a worried glance with Yasmin. “It looks like the soldier didn’t fall for the trick,” Lina whispered, trying to stay calm.
“Even with this amazing act, he didn’t give in,” Yasmin whispered, frustrated. “Damn it!”
As the soldier continued his watch, the girls noticed that Amira had vanished from sight. During the distraction caused by Ayana’s performance, Amira had silently moved to a new position, out of the soldier’s line of sight.
The soldier, though suspicious, remained focused on the girls in front of him. Yet, something felt off. He frowned, realizing the group was incomplete. His eyes began to scan the area for the missing girl.
But it was too late.
A sharp sound cut through the air as Amira pulled the trigger. The bullet struck the soldier with precision, the impact reverberating through the warehouse. The soldier fell backward, his eyes wide with surprise as his weapon slipped from his grasp and clattered to the ground.
With the soldier down, Amira swiftly approached, her movements agile and determined. She knelt beside the soldier’s body and, with a resolute expression, began to search his pockets and backpack. She found a magazine of bullets, some visibly new. In the urgency of the moment, Amira took the magazine and the extra bullets, carefully stashing them in her own pocket.
“I got some extra bullets,” Amira said as she stood up, her gaze resolute. “This will give us more chances if we need them.”
Lina rushed to Amira, grabbing her shoulders and pulling her into a tight hug. “You did it,” Lina whispered, her heart racing with relief.
Ayana, still on the ground, let out a deep sigh, trying to compose herself. “That was close,” she murmured before slowly rising, her body still trembling from the tension.
Amira finally lowered her weapon, her eyes fixed on the fallen soldier. “We had no other choice,” she said, her voice trembling but firm. “We needed to do this.”
The group gathered around Amira, the gravity of the situation weighing heavily on them. They knew this was just the first of many obstacles they would need to overcome. The metal hatch still awaited them, offering a possible escape route—but danger was still imminent.
“Let’s go,” Ayana said finally. “We need to get out of here before the other soldiers return.”
With adrenaline still coursing through their veins, the girls quickly moved to the corner of the warehouse where the metal hatch awaited them.
With their combined effort, Lina and the others managed to lift the heavy metal hatch. The creaking sound of the hatch moving revealed a dark and narrow hole below. The group breathed a sigh of relief as the path to freedom opened up.
Ayana looked down into the darkness below, her heart pounding. “It seems we don’t have a choice,” she murmured, trying to stay calm.
Lina nodded, her face pale but determined. “We’ll go down one at a time. Amira, you go first since you have the gun. If there’s anything down there, you can handle it.”
Amira took a deep breath, adjusting the gun in her hand before starting to descend into the hole. The metal ladder was slippery and cold, but Amira stayed focused, moving carefully.
Ayana watched Amira disappear into the darkness before turning to the others. “Once she gives us the signal, the next one goes down. Stay alert for any noise.”
The silence in the warehouse was oppressive, and every second seemed to stretch on. Finally, a faint whisper echoed up from the hole.
“All clear,” came Amira’s voice, muffled but reassuring.
Lina went next, followed by Yasmin, leaving Ayana for last. When Ayana finally began her descent, the cold metal against her hands made her shiver. The descent felt endless, and the darkness around her seemed to swallow everything.
Finally, Ayana felt solid ground beneath her feet and looked around. They were in a narrow, damp tunnel with concrete walls stained by moisture. The air was heavy with the smell of mold and earth.
As the girls progressed through the tunnel, it began to split into several directions. Forks appeared as they continued, each leading to an uncertain and potentially dangerous path.
“We need to choose the right path,” Yasmin murmured, anxiously surveying the various options before them. “We have to think carefully before deciding.”
Lina pointed to one of the forks on the right, where the tunnel appeared less damp and wider. “I think we should go this way. It looks safer and might lead to an exit.”
Ayana nodded in agreement with Lina. “It seems like a good choice. Let’s proceed together, slowly and carefully.”
As they debated, Amira, without a word, started walking toward one of the darker, narrower tunnels on the left. Her steps were silent and almost imperceptible, and she soon disappeared into the darkness.
It was Yasmin who first noticed Amira’s absence. “Hey, where’s Amira?”
Ayana looked around, alarmed, and her eyes widened as she realized Amira was gone. “Did she go alone?” she asked, incredulous.
Lina, visibly irritated, stepped forward and peered into the direction of the dark tunnel. “What is she thinking? We can’t split up like this!”
Yasmin clenched her fists, frustration evident in her voice. “This is madness! We’re in an unknown and dangerous place. She shouldn’t have done this without telling us!”
Ayana tried to stay calm, but concern was clear on her face. “We need to go after her. If we split up, we’re all at risk. She might think she’s protecting us, but it’s too dangerous.”
Lina shook her head, still annoyed but in agreement. “It’s not just about her. We’re all in this together, and we need to act as a group.”
Without further hesitation, the three girls began to follow the narrow tunnel, their hearts pounding as fear and anger mingled. The darkness seemed to swallow the sound of their steps, and every shadow on the concrete walls heightened their tension.
Finally, the girls spotted Amira ahead, walking quickly through the dark tunnel. The tension in the air was palpable, and the situation seemed to worsen with each step.
“What do you think you’re doing, Amira?” Lina demanded, her voice laden with irritation and concern.
Amira stopped abruptly, still facing away from the others, her hand gripping the gun firmly but non-threateningly. When she turned to face them, her expression was dark and distant, as if she were in a world of her own.
“I don’t want you to delay me any more than you already have,” Amira said, her voice cold and devoid of emotion.
The words cut through the air like a sharp blade. Ayana and the other girls were stunned, unable to comprehend what they were hearing. Ayana, usually so strong, felt a wave of pain wash over her chest. “What are you talking about?” she asked, her voice trembling. Unbeknownst to her, tears began
Lina, visibly shaken, stepped forward, trying to remain calm. “I know you’re still traumatized by everything that’s happened, Amira,” she said, her tone firm yet gentle. “But we’re all in this together. After all, we’re friends, right?” Lina tried to sound optimistic, as if her words could break through the cold barrier that Amira had erected.
Yasmin, standing next to Lina, nodded in agreement. “Yes, Amira,” she added softly, “we’ve been through so
For a moment, Amira remained silent, her dark eyes fixed on the girls before her. Then,
“You don’t understand,” Amira said, her voice
The shock on the girls’ faces was unmistakable. They were left speechless, unable to process what they were hearing. Amira continued, relentless.
“All that we’ve been through was fun, yes,” she said, her voice as cutting as ice. “But from now on, I’m going alone.”
Amira narrowed her eyes, her patience wearing thin. “Where am I supposed to go with you? None of you have a plan or know what to do after we get out of here. It doesn’t make sense to stay together.”
Amira’s words fell like a crushing weight on Ayana, Lina, and Yasmin. The harsh truth was that they really didn’t have a clear goal for what to do after they left the tunnel, heightening their sense of helplessness.
Desperate, Lina stepped forward. “At least tell us what your plan is, Amira. Maybe we can help in some way.”
Amira looked at Lina with an indifferent gaze. “That’s not your problem,” she said, her voice cold and distant. “I have my own plans, and I’ll manage on my own. Take care and good luck.”
With those words, Amira turned abruptly toward the tunnel on the left, her determination clear. The other three were left behind, feeling the weight of Amira’s words and the pain of the uncertainty that hung over them. The tunnel seemed darker and more menacing than ever, and the growing desperation made Ayana, Lina, and Yasmin cling to each other even more, despite having no clear plan on what to do next.
The girls watched as Amira moved further away, her silhouette growing smaller in the darkness of the tunnel. Lina, tears streaming down her face, felt a pang in her chest. Desperate, she called out to the retreating figure.
“Amira! After you sort everything out, will you be able to see us again?”
Lina’s voice was heavy with emotion, and the echo of her words seemed to get lost in the emptiness of the tunnel. Amira paused for a moment, her body rigid in the gloom. She didn’t turn around but raised her arm in a gesture of farewell. The movement was almost imperceptible, a small wave in the darkness, but it conveyed a clear message.
With that silent signal, the girls understood that despite the harsh words and distance, Amira still valued their friendship. The gesture seemed to confirm that, somewhere inside her, there was hope that their paths would cross again.
Feeling a mix of sorrow and a glimmer of hope, Ayana, Lina, and Yasmin resumed their path. The tunnel continued to stretch out before them like a dark maze, but now there was a new determination in their hearts. They knew they had to move forward, not only to find a way out but also to honor the friendship that, even amidst conflict and misunderstandings, remained significant to them.
The girls advanced, their steps echoing softly against the damp tunnel walls. The sense of unity among them was palpable, a reminder that, even in the face of adversity, the strength of their bond could guide them. At each fork in the road, they hesitated for a moment, but the decision on which path to take seemed a little clearer now, with the promise that someday they might reunite with Amira.
As they continued, the tension in the tunnel began to ease slightly, giving way to the hope of a brighter future despite the uncertainties still ahead. The journey was far from over, but the girls' renewed determination was a beacon in the darkness, lighting the way forward and giving them the strength to face whatever lay ahead.
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