Chapter 6:
Dana noctielle
Three Days, a Goddess, and an Instructor Who Doesn't Smile
The streets of Élidora murmur.
To the left, a monstrous traffic jam, horns weaving a concerto of impatience. To the right, a packed bus spills a tide of students onto the sidewalk.
In the center, Dana Noctielle walks.
Hands in her pockets, gaze tilted, steps steady.
She sighs.
— "I can cross a continent in half a second… but I wait like everyone else for a tram."
She looks up.
In front of her: La Confiance Driving School. Pale blue logo, slightly crooked letters, and a little sign: Registrations Open.
She enters.
Inside, a receptionist with a tired smile — the kind of smile from someone who's seen too many stressed teens and too few passes — looks up.
— "Hello, are you here for the theory or driving lessons?"
— "Both. I want to learn… from A to Z. No shortcuts."
The woman blinks, a bit surprised.
— "You’re motivated."
Dana calmly corrects her.
— "No, I’m stubborn."
Day 2 – Road Theory
Testing room.
Ten students, response boxes, a sluggish heat glued to the walls, flickering lights that blink too softly.
Dana is focused.
But the rules are slow, methodical, and filled with logical traps.
— "Why is the right answer never the simplest one?"
A triangular sign, a road marking, a green light trap next to a crosswalk.
She sighs.
— "I’ve fought interdimensional monsters… and here I am, hesitating between C and D."
Coffee break. Another student approaches.
— "How’s it going? I had 27 mistakes on my last mock test."
Dana offers a small box.
— "I’m learning at my pace. And I brought candy. Want a lucky caramel?"
He takes it. They laugh a little. The atmosphere relaxes.
At the end of the day, she finishes with 34 out of 40.
Not perfect… but human enough to pass.
Day 3 – Supervised Driving
In the parking lot, an old white car waits for her. Faded logo on the door, and inside, the scent of worn-out clutch.
At the wheel, Madame Lora, calm, composed… but with quickly frowning eyebrows.
— "Hello Dana, relax and start by showing me the dashboard."
Dana sits down.
Her hands clenched on the wheel, eyes on the pedals, she mutters to herself:
— "I could fuse with the engine… but I promised to be normal."
First attempt: she stalls.
Second attempt: she stalls again.
— "No panic, let's restart."
She sweats.
Blinkers, stop sign, right-of-way rule (she hates right-of-way from the right).
At one point, she presses the pedal too hard.
— "Sorry, my foot’s a bit twitchy."
Madame Lora frowns.
Dana smiles, ironic:
— "I’m allergic to slowness."
But by the end of the lesson…
— "Good. You listen, you're careful, and your mirrors… are perfect."
In her head, Dana screams:
— "Yes."
Day 4 – The Driving Test
D-day.
She waits, standing under light rain, hands crossed, a knot in her stomach.
Then the official examiner arrives.
Monsieur Rigal.
Gray suit, piercing eyes, not a smile.
— "Dana Noctielle? Show me if you deserve to drive."
Dana winces internally.
— "Ouch."
The drive is tense.
A narrow construction zone between cones, a highway merge with a truck too close, a surprise emergency brake.
Monsieur Rigal barely speaks. Just nods, light grunts.
Dana talks to herself:
— "I’m a goddess, I’m speed incarnate… but right now, I’m just a student trying not to stall at the red light."
The examiner takes notes. Long silence.
Then:
— "Adequate. Lack of confidence at the start, but good overall control."
She stares at him.
— "...So I passed?"
He nods.
— "License granted."
Dana walks out, hand over heart.
— "I thought he’d never give it to me."
She returns home.
Drops her bag, sits down, and opens a little box.
Inside: her very first car keychain.
A tiny red flying car, with her name engraved underneath.
She gently places it on the table.
And whispers, smiling:
— "Speed… can also go through traffic jams."
End of Chapter 6 – I Want a Car
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