Chapter 53:

Chapter 53: Panic in the Infinite Comic!

Saphira Noctielle


When the pencil slips… and reality derails with it.

The sun dreams softly through the pearlescent stained-glass windows of the blue tower. In the lunar tea room, the walls breathe a sweet chocolate steam sitting cross-legged on her favorite cushion, Saphira dips a lightning-bolt-shaped cookie into a cup of starry hot chocolate she closes her eyes, finally, a moment of calm but peace shatters.

A giant bubble, made of trembling ink and wavering lines, bursts through the ceiling with a masterful "BLORK!" It explodes in mid-air, and a drawn messenger tumbles to the floor, half-erased, a pencil stuck in his back like an emergency flag he raises a hand, panting: "HELP! The comic book reality… is fading!"

Saphira freezes, her cookie half-melted between her fingers a few seconds later, an explosion of colorful bubbles rips through the wall. Super Potato, hero of the drawn dimensions, floats amidst undulating lines he spins with flair, cape in the wind. —"It's time. Mission: ULTIMATE INKING OPERATION! Saphira, head for the dimensional panel!"

Saphira, still covered in chocolate, nods:"Just let me put on my cape."

They cross a spiral portal of text bubbles and twisted action lines, upon arrival: a void filled with panels, rectangles suspended in space, black and white frames each panel is a world, and these worlds are collapsing dialogues liquefy, colors melt onto the margins, characters become formless sketches, their faces distorted by panic one panel flashes violently, bordered by exclamation points. Saphira clenches her fists. Super Potato adjusts his cape: "Let's go."

In the ninth panel, the setting is chaotic flying papers, burst bubbles on the ground, entire paragraphs suspended in the air like dead leaves and in the center... a twisted silhouette the mad screenwriter a humanoid scribble dressed in a crumpled suit, broken glasses on his nose, a giant quill pen in his hands his voice scrapes like a pencil lead on plastic: "They rejected me! my ideas were too absurd! so now, I'm rewriting everything no more logic, no more heroes, just… nonsense!"

Saphira, standing tall, her voice taut.

 —"You want to erase stories, but I'm the one who dreams here."

The Screenwriter strikes the ground with his quill reality skips a panel, then another then another they are caught in a spiral western panel Super Potato draws two whipped cream revolvers, slides on a cactus, and lands on a lassoed horse Manga panel: Saphira screams a non-existent name, draws a sword larger than herself, and cuts a mountain... which transforms into sushi. romantic panel: the setting turns pink, rain falls, and syrupy music begins. Saphira, trapped in a ruffled dress: "No! not the 'confession with emotional rain' panel!" She turns to Super Potato and, despite herself, murmurs: "I… admire you, Potato." Super Potato, horrified: "WHAT?!"

They look at each other, then both explode out of the panel panting, Saphira falls to her knees at the edge of a trembling margin her fingers find a familiar object in her pocket: a blue light pencil. It pulses softly, like an untold dream. She stands up:"If it's a comic, then we can draw it ourselves."

With a confident gesture, she draws a new bubble. "FINAL PANEL: The screenwriter gets a huge cosmic toast right in the panel." PLOP. The mad Screenwriter screams, then crashes to the ground, buried under an avalanche of giant, furiously drawn pieces of toast. Super Potato, raising his fist: "Art is saved!"

The comic stabilizes colors return lines straighten secondary characters return, dancing in the margins, celebrating their return to logic even the romantic panel becomes comical a new page appears, white, fresh, vibrant with ink at the very top, a new title is inscribed, shining. "The Queen of Lightning and the Cosmic Potato save Imagination again!" Saphira looks at the page. "do you think they'll publish this?" Super Potato bites into a dimensional cookie. "I hope so. I want royalties." They high-five, then leave, leaving behind a redrawn Universe and a slightly funnier world.

End of Chapter 53 – Panic in the Infinite Comic!