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When I started publishing this story, my goal wasn't to create a masterpiece. My main goal was to understand the platforms, how they work, their pace... but above all, to improve myself, to grow as an author, thanks to your outside perspectives and your feedback.Today, I think I won't continue this story.Not because I no longer believe in it, but because I feel I've strayed from the essence I wanted to give it. I made mistakes: in the structure, in the pace, in the way I constructed certain chapters... Perhaps I also put too much pressure on myself, too many expectations.But I don't regret anything.It was an important exercise. A step.And above all, I'd like to know what you, the readers, thought of it.Even if this story ends here, your feedback will be invaluable for me as I move forward.Because no, I don't intend to stop writing.On the contrary: I'm going to take the time to come back with a more controlled story, more faithful to what I have in mind. A story that I hope will be better, stronger... and capable of moving you.I don't intend to disappear from the platform.If you have any advice, opinions, or comments, I'm more than welcome.Thank you again.