Chapter 22:
Tyur'ma
Notes and Stuff
Thanks for reading! As a reward, have some notes and more details about this story. Perhaps we’ll meet again someday.
Some notes on Names and Pronunciation
The characters in this story and even the locations and objects have all had their names chosen specifically for them. Here is a list of the names, their pronunciation and the meaning behind each one, according to Google. I have adjusted the pronunciations of some names to better suit the character. In no particular order:
Characters:
Jesse (Jess-ee) - “God’s Gift”.
Evren (Ehv-renn) or Evvy (Ehv-vee) - “Universe” or “Cosmos”.
Cayti (Kay-tee) - Variant of the name ‘Katherine’, meaning “Pure”.
Sivan (Siv-en) - “Protector of the Community”.
Roi (Roy) - “My Shepherd”.
Agnar (Aeg-nar) - “Eagle Warrior”.
Tyur’ma (Tiu-ri-mua) - Loosely translates to ‘Slammer’.
Gavrel (Gahv-rill) - A variant of the name ‘Gabriel’, meaning “God is my strong man”.
Fianna (Fee-ah-nah) - A legendary band of warriors.
Jari (Jar-ree) - “Helmet Warrior”.
Asa (Ass-ah) - “Healer”
Bree (Bree) - Short for ‘Brianna’, meaning “High” or “Noble”.
Chelo (Chell-oh) - “Consolation” or “Comfort”.
Hitomi (Hih-toh-mee) - “Pupil of the eye”.
Zandra (Zahn-drah) - Short for ‘Alexandra’, meaning “Protector of mankind”.
Otto (Ot-toe) - “Wealth” or “Fortune”.
Fuku (Foo-koo) - “Happiness” or “Good luck”.
Kalla (Kah-la) - “Pure” and “Strong”.
Moisei (Maw-sey) - A variant of the name ‘Moses’, meaning “Son”.
Elevi (Ell-ehv-ee) - A play on the word ‘elevation’, translated from ‘Ural’.
Places:
Kaunis (Kaw-niss) - “Beautiful”.
Ragin (Rah-gin) - “Music” or “Melody”.
Sheinfeld (Shey-in-feld) - “Beautiful Feild”.
Masuda (Mah-soo-dah) - “Happy” or “Lucky”.
Some notes on Vehicles
All vehicles in this story are based on a real world counterpart. Here are some of the more important ones, in order of appearance:
Tyur’ma is based on the Teledyne AGS Expeditionary Tank “Slammer”. For the purpose of the story and the lack of information online, she’s been heavily modified and her internal layout is different.
- The screens within her are similar to the ones found in the ADF-11F Raven’s cockpit from Ace Combat 7.- The shell she fires is based on the M900A1 APFSDS round.
- Her machine guns are modified M240 machine guns, the main difference being the chainlink ammunition belts don’t disintegrate, but do separate from the cartridges.
- And more smaller details that I won’t bore you with.
Parting Words
If you’ve made it this far, then all I can offer you is a heartfelt thank you. I write for my own enjoyment, but knowing that other people also enjoy what I write warms me in ways I struggle to find normally. See you soon!~ Caelinth
"We were standing on our own
Ears ringing from the wind
And I don't
Remember where to go
So just forfeit your hands
Until we know."
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