Chapter 25:

Eli's First Steps

Crazy Putter: An Isekai Mini Golf Story


The morning light spilled softly over Birthgreen’s shimmering fairways as Eli stood near the first tee. The worn putter in his hands felt heavy—not from its weight, but from the burden of memories it carried. He gazed across the vibrant course that was growing around him, a place that seemed to pulse with life and possibility.

Talin stepped beside him, placing a steady hand on his shoulder.

“This course responds to your heart, Eli,” Talin said gently. “Play not for the score, but for what the game means to you.”

Eli swallowed hard, memories flooding in—the bitter loss, the endless nights haunted by shadows, the feeling of being lost and broken.

He nodded slowly, drawing in a deep breath.

“This is my chance, isn’t it? To… start over?”

Talin smiled. “More than that. To heal.”

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As Eli approached the first ball, the course around him shimmered and shifted, reflecting his inner turmoil. The greens wavered like water, and the hazards stretched like shadows reaching for him.

His first swing was tentative. The ball rolled, but veered off course and stopped short of the cup.

Frustration burned, but Eli clenched his jaw. He wasn’t here to win. He was here to understand.

Mira appeared beside him, her voice calm and encouraging. “It’s okay to stumble. The course will teach you, but only if you listen.”

Eli nodded again, lowering his stance. He focused on the feeling of the putter in his hands—the cool metal, the subtle weight—letting his intention fill the moment.

This time, the ball glided straight and true.

A burst of light bloomed where it settled.

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With every swing, the course responded differently. When Eli played with doubt, the greens trembled, hazards lurked closer, and the shadows whispered fears.

When he played with hope, flowers bloomed and the air hummed softly.

Slowly, Eli realized that Birthgreen was not just a place—it was a mirror for his spirit.

One evening, under the glowing branches of the willow, Eli confided to Mira.

“I carry so much regret. I thought I’d lost everything because I couldn’t win. But maybe… maybe I lost sight of why I played in the first place.”

Mira smiled gently. “Play is never just about winning. It’s about connection—between you, the game, and the world around you.”

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But the darkness that had once consumed Eli was never far behind.

Late one night, as he practiced alone, shadows curled at the edges of his vision. Whispers slithered into his mind, dragging him back to his lowest moments.

“Why bother?” they hissed. “You’re weak. You failed before. You will fail again.”

Eli’s grip tightened on the putter, his breath shallow.

The shadows seemed to grow, twisting the green beneath his feet.

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Before the darkness could overwhelm him, a beam of pure light cut through the shadows—Mira’s echoes multiplied around him, their voices calm and insistent.

“Remember who you are,” they sang softly. “Remember why you came.”

Eli closed his eyes, the warmth of their presence filling him.

He stood tall and swung with all the hope and courage he could muster.

The ball rolled steadily, slicing through the creeping shadows, and landed squarely in the cup.

Light exploded around the green, banishing the darkness.

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With the shadows retreating, Eli felt something shift within him.

He understood now: the Game was a living thing—not a battle to win, but a dance to join.

The next days saw him playing with a new lightness, every stroke a declaration of joy, every putt a prayer of connection.

The course blossomed with him, growing richer and more vibrant.

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Yet, far beyond the peaceful greens of Birthgreen, the remnants of The Corruptor’s influence were not idle.

Whispers in dark realms spoke of fractures in the League, of corruption seeping into new realities.

A coalition of shadowed players, twisted by ambition and hunger for control, plotted to seize the power of the Song Bloom seeds for themselves.

Their leader, a mysterious figure known only as The Veil, wore a mask forged from fractured rules and broken promises.

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Meanwhile, Selis, newly freed from the rigid discipline of the Mirror Guardians, grappled with her own uncertainties.

She had embraced the chaotic beauty of Birthgreen, but old habits died hard.

Perfection still called to her, a siren’s voice promising safety and control.

One night, as she practiced her strokes beneath the shimmering canopy, she faltered.

Her putt rolled wide.

Frustrated tears slipped down her cheeks.

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Talin found her sitting alone, the willow tree’s light casting soft shadows around her.

“It’s not failure,” he said quietly. “It’s a step on the path.”

Selis shook her head. “I want to be better. I want to protect the game.”

Talin smiled. “Then protect it not by control, but by trust. Trust in yourself, in your team, and in the game’s spirit.”

Selis wiped her eyes, breath steadying.

“I will try.”

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In the shadows, The Veil made a bold move.

With a handful of corrupted players, they launched an assault on the newly growing courses — seeking to corrupt the seeds of light, to twist pure play into domination.

The assault fractured the greens, spreading decay and chaos.

The Song Bloom’s seeds trembled, struggling to hold their glow.

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The League of Verdant Play rallied.

Lyra, Talin, Mira, Selis, Eli, and the Guardians gathered, forming a united front against the spreading darkness.

“Together,” Lyra declared, “we will protect the heart of the Game.”

The players took their places on the fractured greens, their swings igniting beams of light.

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The course itself became a battlefield — greens warping, hazards shifting like living creatures.

Players faced illusions crafted from their deepest fears and regrets.

Eli confronted the dark echoes of his past once more, but with his newfound strength, he stood firm.

Selis balanced precision with freedom, weaving shots that pierced shadows and sparked hope.

Talin’s leadership held the team together, his faith in the game’s spirit unshakable.

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At the heart of the battle, The Veil appeared — a swirling mask of broken rules and shattered hopes.

Lyra stepped forward, her voice steady and strong.

“This game is bigger than your ambition.”

With a deep breath, she swung her putter.

The ball blazed with pure light, flying through the twisted shadows and striking The Veil’s mask.

The mask shattered, releasing a burst of radiant energy.

The darkness dissolved.

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With The Veil’s defeat, the corrupted greens began to heal.

The Song Bloom’s seeds glowed brighter than ever.

Players from across the multiverse joined the celebration, their laughter and joy weaving a new tapestry of play.

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