Chapter 55:

Mysterious Guide

Shadows of another life: The golden dawn


Rain pounded the forest like the beat of a war drum, each drop hammering against Cael’s shoulders, sliding down his hair, soaking the edges of his cloak. He ran without thought, only instinct, heart hammering, lungs on fire. Every second Lucien was gone pressed down heavier, a lead weight on his chest.

The ruins lay ahead, scattered across the clearing like broken teeth of some long-dead giant. Stone blocks half-swallowed by moss, pillars leaning as if tired of holding themselves upright. Faint light shimmered from the cracks, blue and unearthly, pulsing in rhythm with something invisible.

Cael skidded to a stop, chest heaving, mud sucking at his boots. The carvings on the stones rearranged themselves as he approached, curling into words that burned into his eyes:

The light-bearer shall die in every path. His end is the root of all beginnings.”

He swallowed hard. The wind whipped rain into his face. “No,” he rasped, fingers digging into the cold stone. “No, I never wrote this. I never—”

A chime rang through the air, cold, mechanical. The kind of sound that didn’t belong anywhere except in the System itself.

>[System Notice: Deviation Detected.]

Cael staggered back, teeth gritted. “Deviation? What the hell are you talking about?”

Another chime. The blue light flickered over his boots, then across the ruins. Words rose, pale against the wet stone:

[Canon integrity compromised. The target character’s death is a fixed point. Survival is not permitted.]

He pressed his hands against his temples. Every rewind, every reset flashed through his mind. Every time he had tried to save Lucien, every fire, every fall, every rope, every death. Every failure. The System didn’t just observe—they enforced. The rules were absolute.

His voice cracked. “So… he’ll always die? Wasn't it supposed to be my mission to save him? So how—"

A gust of wind tore through the ruins, rattling stone. For a moment, the world hung still. Then:

[Warning: Excessive deviation will result in collapse.]

Collapse. The word thudded through him, hammering his skull. Collapse of the world, the timelines, himself? He couldn’t tell. His knees buckled, mud sucking at them as he fell forward onto the cold, wet stone. His fists curled into the wet dirt.

“I can’t,” he whispered, voice ragged, teeth gritted against the storm. “Not again. I can’t keep watching him die.”

But even in the crushing weight of despair, something in him flared. Not hope. Not courage. Something sharper. Determination. Rage. The refusal to be powerless.

“I don’t care what collapses,” he muttered, fingers clawing into the mud. “I don’t care if the world tears itself apart. If saving Lucien means breaking every rule, then I’ll break it. Every single one of them.”

The blue runes flared white, blinding him for a moment, burning his vision, before vanishing into the wet stone. The clearing stilled. Only the rain remained, cold against his skin, and the rumble of thunder in the distance.

He staggered to his feet, soaked to the bone. Fingers slick with mud, hands trembling. His boots slipped as he pressed forward. Each step felt heavier than the last, like the forest itself resisted him, like the world didn’t want him to succeed.

The storm thinned only slightly as he pressed into the denser forest, branches clawing at his arms. Roots twisted underfoot, slick with rain. He stumbled over one, caught himself against a tree, and pressed forward. The leaves rustled above him in whispers, half-carried by wind, half-imagined by fear.

He knew he wasn’t alone. Not yet. Something—someone—had guided him here. It might be the system or something else..?

He froze. A shadow moved at the edge of his vision, just for a moment, gone the next. He spun, heart hammering. Nothing. Only trees, wet and shivering.

“Who’s there?” he demanded. Voice cutting through the forest, sharp and raw. No answer. Just the wind, sighing through broken branches.

And yet, he felt it. The pull. The subtle hints, the doors that opened when they shouldn’t, the paths that didn’t exist yesterday now leading somewhere. Someone—or something—was nudging him. And he didn’t know if it was friend or enemy.

His stomach twisted. His mind reeled. Lucien was somewhere. Alive. And whoever—or whatever—was guiding him… might be trying to lead him to the very trap that Future Cael had set.

He shook his head violently. “No,” he whispered, teeth gritted. “I’ll find him. I’ll find him myself.”

Branches lashed at his face. Rain plastered his hair to his skull. His lungs burned. Every muscle screamed. Every instinct told him to stop. But he didn’t. He couldn’t.

Hours passed—or maybe minutes; time lost all meaning in the storm and the ruins. Each clearing he entered seemed familiar and foreign at the same time, like the forest had shifted while he wasn’t looking. Faint blue light shimmered again, and this time he swore he could hear it—a whisper at the edge of hearing, just beyond the raindrops.

“Here,” the whisper seemed to say. But when he spun, nothing was there.

His hands clenched at his sides. “Lucien,” he called into the storm. His voice cracked, raw with desperation. “Where are you?”

No answer.

Mud sucked at his boots as he pushed forward, every step a battle against nature and against the collapse warning that haunted his mind. He could feel the System watching, evaluating. Every deviation, every rebellion against fate, it measured, it counted.

And yet… he pressed on.

The ruins opened into another clearing. This one different. Less chaotic. Stone pillars lined in a rough circle, faint carvings glimmering pale blue in the rain. Cael stopped, chest heaving. The symbols pulsed once, then settled into stillness.

He stepped closer. Fingers brushed against the moss-cold stone. Images flashed across his vision. Not clear, not words, not memories exactly—more like fragments. A scream. A flash of flame. Lucien’s face twisted in pain. And then… calm. Warmth. Sheets. A tray of food. A lamp glowing soft.

Cael’s heart stuttered. He staggered back. “What… what is this?”

The runes flickered faintly. A whisper rode the rain, carried in the wind, almost too soft to hear.

“Look closer.”

He spun. No one. Only the stones, the rain, the ruins.

Something tugged at his mind, faint, deliberate. Not a voice. Not words. Something more subtle. Guidance. Direction. Not orders. Not threats. Just… nudge after nudge, leading him forward.

And every instinct screamed: Don’t trust it.

But he followed anyway.

Each step forward, each wet, aching, slipping step, felt heavier. The whispers grew slightly louder—or maybe he imagined it. Something in him ached. Fear. Anger. Exhaustion. And yet, determination burned brighter than the storm.

Hours—or maybe minutes, the storm blurring all sense of time—passed. Another clearing opened. This one smaller, tighter, almost like a room carved from the forest itself. Faint blue light glimmered along the edges of fallen stones.

He stopped. Breath heaving. Mud sliding off his boots. Rain dripping down his hair and into his eyes. He scanned the clearing. No one. No cages. No Lucien.

And yet, the subtle nudges continued. He could feel them in the air, in the rhythm of the storm, in the very pattern of the ruins. Someone—something—was guiding him.

And he didn’t know if it was friend or enemy.

He sank to his knees, fists digging into mud. “I don’t care,” he whispered, teeth gritted. “I’ll keep going. I’ll find you. No matter what.”

The wind whispered again. Faint. Almost imperceptible.

“Keep going.”

Cael clenched his eyes shut. Heart hammering. Mind on fire. Rain soaking him to the bone. Still all his instincts was giving him positive signal.

“Yes,” he whispered back. “I will.”

He rose again, hands trembling, boots slick with mud. Step by step, into the unknown, guided by a force he could not see, through ruins that shifted and twisted with every blink, toward the path he didn’t know—and the truth that he would not yet understand.

Because the guide, whoever it was, remained unseen.

And the world, unstable as it was, watched.

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Ilaira J.
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