Chapter 9:

Chapter 9 : Ashes of the Failure

The Last Prayer Part 1 : Send Us the Devil


  
Smoke still hung in the air like a curse that refused to leave. The night had swallowed Dhaara whole, and the land that once echoed with the defiant roar of gunfire now lay in complete silence—broken only by the whisper of wind and the crackle of dying flames. The smell of blood mixed with burnt metal, crawling down into the soil that had drunk too much of both.
Bodies were scattered across the ruined outpost. Some half-buried in the dirt, others staring blankly toward a heaven that had never listened. The rebellion’s first major strike had failed. The convoy still rolled under Varma’s banner, untouched.
Amidst that graveyard of courage sat the Devil.
He wasn’t bleeding anymore—his wounds had clotted—but the blood that dried across his gloves had turned the same color as the dirt. His eyes were fixed on nothing, a blank stillness too controlled to be despair. Around him, whispers stirred like ghosts.
“Is he dead?” one man muttered behind a broken truck.
“No… worse,” another replied. “He’s thinking.”
The moon was pale, bathing his figure in a cold silver hue. Somewhere behind him, a rifle clattered—a survivor dragging himself across the ground. The Devil didn’t move. His mind wasn’t here. It was somewhere between the flickering flames and the memory of screams that had never left him.
Ishani found him like that. Limping, dust coating her face, a shallow cut across her cheek. Her eyes darted around the field of corpses, her breath caught between horror and disbelief. When she saw him—motionless, almost statuesque—her body trembled.
“You…” she started, but her voice cracked. “Even Devils bleed, it seems.”
He turned his head slightly, the movement almost mechanical. For a moment, it looked as if he hadn’t even heard her. Then his voice came—low, steady, void of all emotion.
“A victory that costs the soul isn’t one,” he murmured. “But defeat… that teaches you how to steal it back.”
The words hung between them like smoke—suffocating, prophetic. Ishani knelt beside him. She could see his eyes clearly now: no rage, no grief, just a cold precision sharpening itself in silence. He wasn’t mourning. He was calculating.
From the distant horizon came the faint echo of boots and trucks—the Lords’ men reclaiming what was theirs. Ishani glanced toward the noise, fear glinting in her eyes. But the Devil didn’t move.
“They’ll come here,” she said. “If we stay—”
“Let them,” he interrupted. “They’ll find nothing left to take.”
The words chilled her.
By dawn, the sky turned the color of rust. The villagers gathered the dead. No one spoke. The Devil oversaw the funerals without ceremony—just fire, smoke, and the smell of burned gunpowder. Ishani stood beside him as the first body burned. Her fingers trembled as she lit the pyre of a boy she’d trained with.
“Say something,” she whispered to him.
He stared into the flames. “They knew what they signed up for.”
“That’s not enough.”
He turned to her, finally meeting her gaze. The reflection of fire danced in his steel-gray eyes, and for the first time, she saw a flicker of humanity buried deep—far beneath the cold surface.
“What do you want me to say?” he asked. “That their deaths mean something? That the Lords will tremble because of a few corpses? No, Ishani. The truth is worse—they won’t even notice. They’ll eat. They’ll drink. They’ll sleep soundly.”
She clenched her fists. “Then why fight?”
He looked back at the pyres, his expression hardening.“It’s not about winning,” he said. “It’s about who breaks first—them or us.”
For a long while, neither spoke. The flames crackled. Ash rose into the wind like shattered prayers.
When the last body turned to smoke, he faced the survivors. Maybe twenty left. All wounded. All hungry. All staring at him as if waiting for a miracle.
He didn’t give them one.
“The Lords think our blood stains their soil,” he said. “They forget—blood feeds roots. We won’t rise from blessings. We’ll rise from the rot they left behind.”
He stepped forward, voice low but cutting like steel.“If they call me Devil, then I’ll show them what their God should have feared.”
The silence that followed was heavy. But it wasn’t despair anymore. It was something rawer—anger. Fire. Resolve.
Later that night, Ishani found him alone again, sitting near the same river that bordered Dhaara. The water shimmered faintly beneath the moonlight, carrying reflections of their burning camp.
“What now?” she asked softly.
“We rebuild,” he said simply.
And he did.
By the next day, the Devil had begun reshaping the rebellion into something sharper, colder, and quieter.
He divided the survivors into three units.Children were trained as Whispers—messengers, spies, and eyes in the shadows.Women became Vipers—stealth, sabotage, and silent kills.Men, the strongest of them, became Fangs—the striking force, lethal and disciplined.
Ishani was placed in command of the Vipers. At first, she hesitated. But when he told her, “You lead because you think before you shoot,” something inside her straightened.
Training began in the abandoned mines and burnt houses. Days turned into weeks. The Devil turned survivors into hunters, fear into fuel. Every bullet counted, every step planned.
A child approached one evening, breathless.“Sir… word from the south. Varma’s man—Suryan Rao—is coming to inspect the mines.”
The Devil’s eyes lifted from the map spread before him. “When?”
“Three days.”
Ishani leaned over the table, her gaze hard. “We’re going after him?”
He smirked faintly. “No. We’re going to bury him—alive, beneath their lies.”
That night, beneath the same dying moon, Ishani found him cleaning his weapons by the fire. His coat was half-open, the glow flickering against the scars running down his chest and forearm. She sat beside him, quiet.
“Why do you keep pushing us?” she asked. “Even gods would have stopped after that defeat.”
He didn’t look up. He reassembled his pistol piece by piece before answering.“I’m not trying to be a god,” he said. “I’m trying to remind them that humans were never meant to kneel.”
She stared at him. For the first time since she’d met him, there was no fear—only understanding. Slowly, she reached out and took his glove. It was crusted with blood. She wiped it with a piece of cloth until the black stains faded.
He watched silently.
“You don’t need to do that,” he said finally.
“I know,” she replied. “But someone should.”
The firelight danced between them. He looked away, though his voice lowered to a whisper meant only for her.
“She doesn’t know it yet,” he thought. “But she’s the reason I’ll burn the Lords to the ground.”
When the camp slept, they moved.
The night was quiet, almost holy in its stillness. The rebellion had changed form—no longer an army, but a shadow. Ishani led her Vipers in silence, faces painted dark. The Devil walked ahead, his rifle slung across his back, coat swaying with each step.
The wind carried the smell of metal and earth. Ahead, through the fog, the glow of the mines pulsed faintly.
“They buried hope here long ago,” his mind whispered. “I’m not here to dig it out… I’m here to make it scream.”
And with that, they vanished into the mist.
The night didn’t howl anymore. It waited.

 

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