Chapter 7:

[Announcement!]

Underland: Monarch [Early Draft]


Hello! Thank you so much to all those who have been reading Underland: Monarch. 

I am growing more aware of the plot holes and the world building gaps I've been leaving behind in my chapters, and I think before it gets too bad I'm going to be rewriting Monarch from the beginning. I'll be leaving this early draft alone for now. 

When I started writing Monarch, I just dove right in. I didn't even plan out a plot or anything (and it probably shows). I absolutely love my story though, and, unlike past stories I've attempted to write, I actually seriously enjoy this one.

Some things I want to adjust for sure are how Tani was introduced (her whole character might get changed a bit) and how the overall world was introduced. I also will have an actual plot to go by, so the story should stay more focused. I'll release many chapters at once possibly in January once I've eliminated as many plot holes and fixed/changed what I want to fix/change. This current version of Underland: Monarch will be labeled as "Early Draft". 

When I share the new version it will simply just be "Underland: Monarch" like this one used to be (and it will have a MUCH cooler cover). 

Side characters and cameos are also going to be accepted! I've been accepting them early on Scratch (https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1229956237) and I will also be accepting them here on Honeyfeed (and soon on Character Hub) 

By filling out this character description form and sharing it in the comments of this chapter you can create an Underlander that may appear once or twice in some of the chapters:

Underlander Name (please come up with something creative, not just 'Bob', 'Stella', or any other generic name) || Age || Skin color (any shade of grey including white OR a very dark brown) || Sclera Color (sclera cannot be white!) || Pupil Color || Hair color + Length/Style || Outfit (optional, it may not even be described || Other

Most Underlanders do not wield Avetja or Zotzña, so your character should be labeled as having Common Energy Affinity (CEA).

Monarch IS just a side project at this point, I have lots of other things I'm doing on Scratch. If it starts to get more attention I may turn my focus primarily to it. 

Once again, thank you so much for being an early reader! <3