Chapter 9:
FAINT - A NOVEL VER. by Noir
Sora’s shield stands alone in a quiet green field.
The blue sea glimmers as birds fly freely.
SFX (ambient): FWSSSH… (grass) / CRYAAH… CRYAAH… (birds)
Caption: “SORA.”
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Meanwhile — F-Class Town Hall, Rainy Night
Town Hall erupts in a massive explosion, lighting up the rain-soaked night.
SFX: BOOOOOM!!!
Yota sprinting, trembling. Behind him, a wall of fire blows out.
Yota (panicked):
“Move… move… MOVE!”
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Artemis hurling radiant star-swords from behind him with violent force and fury.
Artemis (roaring):
“ARGHH!!”
SFX: SHRRAKKK!! (blade tear)
The star-sword rockets forward through the rain.
Ahead, white-flamed Kert stands, unfazed.
Sora’s burning shield at his side.
SFX: FWOOOSH—!
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He suddenly hurls Sora’s shield — vicious force towards Artemis.
Kert:
“Expand.”
SFX: WHOOOM—! / CRRRK!
The shield detonates in size mid-flight, into a four-story white-flame square shield covering half the town hall.
Artemis looks up, eyes wide.
Artemis:
“What tha—?!!”
SFX: VRAAAAMMMM!!!
Yota skids to a stop, staring at the massive shield.
Yota:
“…Hell is that?!”
The front of the enormous shield slams forward, “SORA” printed on it. As it drives toward Artemis star swords shattering each one.
SFX:
KRANNG!
SHRRRK!
BANG—BANG—BANG!
TK-TK-TK! (coil dismantling)
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Kert sinks into a lower stance, air warping around him.
Kert (serious, unfazed):
“Fall.”
SFX: VMMM… (air distortion)
The giant “SORA” shield looms over Artemis… tipping forward, flames dragging it down.
SFX:
GRROOOAAN…
FWOOOM…
Artemis starts slapping himself like a mad man playing the hambone — chest, legs, arms, face — rapid, brutal, deranged.
Each hit ignites radiant star-points around him.
Artemis:
“ARR!!—”
SFX:
PAPAPAPA-PAP-PAP!!
THK-THK-THK!!
From the ground, radiant jack-stands materialize, shooting upward.
SFX: TNNNNK—!
As the shield drops like a falling building, Artemis roars.
Artemis (roar):
“—AHH!!”
Jack-stands erupt all around him, slamming into the massive shield and catching it mid-fall.
White flames burst outward.
SFX:
KA-THOOM!!!
KRASHHHH!!
VRRRNNNK!!
SKRRRSHHH!!
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Under the dragged-down shield, Artemis keeps slapping.
SFX:
PAPAPAPA!!
KRNNNK—! KRNNNK—!
SKRRR-CRACK!!
Above, Kert rockets into the air.
SFX: FWOOOM!
He drops back down, air twisting around him.
Kert:
“Contract.”
SFX: VMMMM—!
The colossal shield snaps back to normal size midair retracting like a vacuum.
The massive jack-stands remain, exposed and shaking violently.
Artemis finally looks up, teeth grinding.
Artemis (confused, bitter):
“Hh..?”
The shield slowly begins descending again.
SFX: GRRROOOO…
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Kert descends fast, one hand grabbing the falling shield midair.
SFX: FWOOOOSH—!
He slams into the ground, torso leaning back, right arm cocked, shield arm pulled tight.
SFX:
THOOM!
VRRNNNK!!
Kert swings.
Artemis dodges at the last second.
The shield strike obliterates a jack-stand behind him.
SFX:
KA-RRRRSHHH!!!
SHHHHRRRR—!
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Kert’s looks down.
Artemis crouched with a twisted grin.
Artemis (chuckle):
“Heh.”
Kert’s left fist pistons into Artemis’s gut, cracking the jack-stand behind him.
SFX:
THUDD!!
KRSSHHH!!
As Artemis’s body jerks—
Kert instantly kills his flames, grabbing him by the shirt, yanking him back.
SFX: GRIP!!
reeling Artemis in, he draws his shield-arm back, air tightening around it.
SFX: VMMM…
Kerts hits flaming shield into Artemis’s face with vicious force.
SFX:
BA-KOOM!!!
VWAAAAM!!
Artemis rockets backward, smashing through another jack-stand.
SFX:
KRRAAAASH!!
SHHHHRR!
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Artemis tumbles midair, grimacing.
Kert dashes in, unfazed, pressing a palm to Artemis’s torso and shoving him farther back.
SFX:
FWOOOSH!
THMP!
Still sliding, Kert leans back, feet skimming across melting pavement.
He grabs Artemis by the ankles.
SFX:
SKRRRRT—!
GRAB!
He swings Artemis in a brutal spin, feet leaving a molten trail.
SFX:
WHRRR—WHOOOM!!
CRRRSHHH!!
Kert grinds to a halt and shot-put-hurls Artemis toward a nearby wall.
SFX:
HNNNGH—!
SHOOOOOM!!
Artemis spirals in slow-motion, inches from impact.
Below, Yota slides backward, dodging back bending.
His eyes lock on Artemis.
Yota:
“…Presence!”
SFX:
SHHH—
SKRRRT!
Artemis slams into the wall.
SFX:
BAA-KOOOOOOM!!!
GRRRRRSHHHH!!
CRACK-CRACK-CRACK!!
Yota drops flat, covering his head under the blast.
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Rain pours over the shattered wall.
Smoke rolls out of the hole.
SFX: HSSSHHH…
Yota leans inside cautiously.
Yota (thinking):
“Their powers…”
“…seem different.”
Inside, Artemis’s hand moves to slap his thigh.
Yota (thinking, small):
“…Like… they’ve evolved!”
SFX: PAP—
Yota whips his back to the wall as a sun-beam detonates outward, blowing the hole wider.
SFX:
BWAAAAM!!!
KR-THOOOM!!
The beam rockets toward Kert.
He braces low, one foot dug in.
Kert (sharp):
“Expand!”
The shield swells into the ground, causing the beam to splash off its sides, torching the street.
SFX:
VRAAAASH!!
SKRRSHHH!!
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Yota’s pinned flat against the wall, frozen.
From behind him, Artemis rockets out of the hole, bloodied, eyes wild.
His palms radiate violent blue star-dust.
Tiny blue Wolf-Rayet mini-stars orbit him as he charges.
Artemis (sinister roar):
“WOLF RAYET!!!”
SFX:
FWOOOM!!
SHHHHHK!!
Artemis streaks past Yota and drops over Kert.
SFX:
VRAAAAAAM!!
PULSE-PULSE-PULSE!!
He slams down, punching the engulfed shield again and again.
Kert’s feet melt into the pavement.
Around him, the mini-stars fire off like lasers, striking Kert from every angle.
SFX:
BA-BA-BA-BA-KOOM!!
SHRRRAAAASH!!
ZNNN! ZNNN! ZNNN!
SKRRRSHH!!
One laser cracks into Kert’s ribs, splitting the armor.
SFX: KRACK!!
Another slices past the back of his head, peeling armor, scorching skin.
SFX: ZNNK!!
Blood drips from his exposed cheek.
He doesn’t flinch.
SFX: DRIP…
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Artemis keeps hammering, shoulders rolling in vicious rhythm, blue star-flame spiraling around him.
Artemis (roaring, grinning):
“THE STARS BURN—”
“MUCH HOTTER—”
“THAN YOUR FLAME!!”
SFX:
BA-BA-BA-BA-KOOM!!
VWHAM! VWHAM!
Shockwaves ripple over the shield.
Cracks crawl across its surface.
SFX:
CRNNNK… CRACK…
WHOOOM!!
Artemis’s shockwaves and laser-stars pound Kert from all sides.
Kert unmoving, listens.
Artemis (off, taunting):
“And IF your corporal had used—”
“that shield the way YOU do…”
“Instead of lowering it like an idiot—!!”
“Maybe he wouldn’t have died!”
SFX:
ZNNN! ZNNN!
BA-KRAAAM!!
SHRRRRAASH!!
Pressure force Kert’s feet deeper, cracking the ground into a crater.
SFX:
SKRRRRR…
CRACK-CRACK-CRACK!!
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Kert’s white flames spike upward, warping the air.
SFX: VMMMM—!
Body flames surge — denser, hotter, distorting his armor’s outline.
Artemis staggers back, shielding his face from the heat.
SFX:
FWOOOOM!!
SHRRR—!
Kert stands tall in the inferno.
He slowly shrinks the shield back to normal and lowers it to his side.
Kert (unfazed):
“Retract.”
SFX: FWIP—!
Black silence.
Kert (low, quiet):
“…I’m glad…”
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Kert’s white-flame armor fully regenerates.
He shifts the shield onto his back — grieving, not broken.
Kert (quiet sorrow):
“…He remained the same.”
“Until the end…”
SFX: FWOOM…
In a flash, Kert vanishes, leaving a white-flame shockwave and reappears right in front of Artemis, looming.
Kert (serious):
“…Isn’t that right?!”
Artemis flinches.
SFX:
BWAAAM—!
THMP!
Kert’s tightens his body—
As he lunges in and hugs Artemis in a crushing, burning grip.
Steam hisses from Artemis’s skin.
Artemis (in pain):
“Arghh!!”
SFX:
SSSSZZZTT!!
GRRNNNK!!
Kert blasts skyward, still gripping him.
Kert (roar):
“Artemis!!”
SFX:
KA-THOOOOOM!!!
FWOOOOOOOSH!!
CRACK—CRACK—CRACK!!
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High in the sky, Artemis suddenly grins.
His skin bubbles; as he slaps his own face.
SFX: PAP!!
A star detonates between their bodies, blowing both away.
SFX:
BWHOOOOM!!!
KRNNNK—!
Artemis rips free.
White flame and star-dust scatter like shrapnel between them.
As Kert descends, Artemis floats below him, shirt peeling off in the air.
Artemis (mocking grin):
“Finally remembered me!”
“Handsome looks didn’t ring a bell?!!”
SFX: SSSHHH… (cloth burning, falling)
Kert drops toward him, ignoring the taunts.
SFX:
FWOOOSH!!
VMMM—!
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Artemis grins, one front tooth missing.
Artemis (bloody chuckle):
“theh..”
SFX: DRIP…
Black Screen…
Artemis (caption, cold):
“100%…!”
Instantly, they collide midair, plummeting toward the earth.
Both unleash a savage flurry of punches:
Kert’s flames burst brighter, flamed after-fists trailing every strike.
Artemis counters with radiant blows, star-swords swinging in sync behind him.
Artemis & Kert (simultaneous roar):
“AHHHH!!!!!”
SFX:
BA-BA-BA-BA-BA-BOOM!!
FWAM! FWAM! FWAM!
ZNNN! ZNNN!
One flaming after-fist crushes Artemis’s nose.
SFX:
KRRRACK!!
SHHHP!
They smash into the ground.
Artemis’s back cracks the earth on impact.
Artemis (unconscious grunt):
“Eff—!”
Kert stays on top of him, raining flame punches, drilling him deeper. Detonating shockwaves.
Kert (roaring, relentless):
“!!RRHH—RRHH—RHHHH!!!”
The ground splits, debris erupting higher than both fighters.
SFX:
KA-THOOOOOM!!
GRRRSHHH!!
CRACK-CRACK-CRACK!!
One final blow slams Artemis’s head back; his eyes roll white.
SFX: THMP…
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The town hall district is wrecked.
Dust rises as rain slows.
SFX:
HSSSHH…
WHOOOM…
Yota stands at the edge of a 5-foot crater, shaken.
Yota:
“…”
SFX: DRIP…
Inside the crater, Kert stands barley tall.
At his feet lies Artemis, burned and smoking.
Artemis (weak mutter):
“…how…”
“…was… your flame… hotter…?”
SFX: Sssss…
Artemis’s face is swollen and blistered.
Rain hits his wounds, sizzling.
Artemis (weak, gasping):
“I… haven’t been… defeated…”
“…still can… breathe…”
SFX: TSSSS…
Kert’s flames fully broke apart, drifting off
Showing his eye first.
Seeing a single tear sliding all along beneath the flame mask.
Artemis (caption):
“…Death of a…—”
Caption (bottom):
TO BE CONTINUED…
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Portrait splash:
Artemis leans in with a twisted grin, finger to his lips in a shh gesture.
White flame flakes drift around him.
Artemis (small):
“Shh…”
SFX:
FSHH…
CRKK…
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