Chapter 5:
“Doomsday Loop: Dawn of the First Day”
When Lin Chuan woke, there was no discomfort.
No delay. No hum. No emptiness.
Everything was excessively smooth.
He sat up. His first reaction wasn’t caution, but confusion—
This “normal” itself was abnormal.
His phone lit up.
A new message appeared on the lock screen.
Zhou Wan: “Have you arrived?”
The timestamp: half an hour ago.
Lin Chuan frowned.
He hadn’t arranged to meet her.
At least, in any version of reality he remembered, he hadn’t.
He opened his contacts.
Next to Zhou Wan’s name was a new note:
[Relationship: Partner (Stable)]
He stared at the line, finger hovering over the screen, hesitant to tap.
Not shock.
But a silent unease after something had been subtly rewritten—
Like discovering someone had rearranged your life while you slept.
Outside, verification began, one detail at a time.
The security guard at the gate smiled at him.
“Morning, Lin! Late night at work again?”
Natural, flawless.
The elderly man at the breakfast stall gave him an extra egg.
“Your girlfriend likes this.”
Lin Chuan accepted it. His palm felt cold.
He didn’t argue.
Because he realized—arguing itself had been weakened.
Not impossible.
But any spoken opposition would automatically be “corrected” into a joke, a mistake, or forgetfulness.
At the office, the front desk recognized him instantly.
No hesitation. No delay.
A system popup flashed briefly:
[Identity Verification Complete]
He glimpsed his employee photo. Slightly different.
Not unfamiliar.
But—
More like a version “willing to integrate.”
Smile angle more perfect, eyes softer.
A Lin Chuan easier for the world to accept.
12:00 noon—the first failed replacement.
In the break room, he saw his reflection in the glass, suddenly lag half a beat.
Not delay.
But—
Two expressions existing at once.
For a moment, he saw the “uncooperative” version of himself.
Calm, alert, observant.
The next second, the image was forcibly overwritten.
A voice he had never heard, rational to the point of coldness, sounded in his mind:
“Replacement incomplete.”
Lin Chuan looked up.
No one around.
He knew the words weren’t meant for a person.
Later in the afternoon, Zhou Wan appeared.
She stood outside the office building, wearing clothes he had never seen, yet somehow should have seen.
She looked at him, smiling as if calibrated perfectly.
“Why are you taking so long to come down?” she complained naturally.
Lin Chuan didn’t evade.
His body reacted faster than his consciousness.
His hand was already raised.
In that instant, he fully confirmed the fifth-day mechanism—
Replacement wasn’t coercion.
It was habituation.
They walked side by side.
The city remained stable, clear, and silent.
“You’re acting weird today,” Zhou Wan said, tilting her head.
“How?”
“You looked at me like…” She paused. “…like you were checking if I was really me.”
Lin Chuan’s chest tightened.
“And are you?”
She didn’t answer immediately.
Her steps lagged half a beat.
That tiny deviation was enough for Lin Chuan to spot a flaw.
“I don’t know,” she said.
Voice soft.
So soft it didn’t feel allowed to be spoken.
The synchronization rate briefly flashed, then was overwritten.
This time, he saw it clearly:
[Synchronization Rate: 82% → 88%]
The number was rising.
Not because he obeyed.
But because—
The world was successfully replacing him.
By evening, they stood at a crossroads.
The red light came on.
Zhou Wan spoke suddenly:
“If one day, I’m no longer me… will you notice?”
Lin Chuan looked at her.
He wanted to say, “I would.”
But the answer stuck in his throat.
Suppressed by some “more reasonable” response.
The light turned green.
The crowd moved forward.
In that instant, Lin Chuan did something extremely dangerous.
He stopped.
The world didn’t prevent it.
But everyone’s steps for a brief moment fell out of sync.
As if tugged by an invisible force.
23:59.
He and Zhou Wan stood on the street corner.
City lights came on, steady and gentle.
She whispered:
“You need to hurry.”
“Hurry for what?”
“Before I’m completely replaced.”
As soon as she said it, her expression returned to normal.
As if the anomaly had never existed.
00:00.
No alert. No announcement.
Only a cold, almost cruel conclusion emerged in his mind—
When the fifth day ended,
He was still Lin Chuan.
But no longer the only one.
And the world had already learned
How to create a more compliant version of him.
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