Chapter 11:
Immortality Is a Lie: A Path Beyond Heaven
The ball rang before dawn.
Lin Shen woke within a moment, his breath steady and body settling into motion before conscious thought followed. The cold remained alongside the ache, but it no longer dictated his movements. He rose and joined the line of initiates as they gathered.
Assignments were quickly issued again. The outer sect read numbers from his slip, voice flat as ever.
When Lin Shen's plaque was called, the same order followed.
"Stone haul. Lower route."
The narrow passage remained empty as he descended. The pressure closed in as it always did, but his breathing adjusted automatically. He lifted the first stone and began the climb, pain flaring briefly before sinking deeper. He climbed at an even pace, neither hurried nor slow. No one followed him and no voice called out to him.
By the second trip, he noticed the difference.
The pauses between trips had grown slightly longer, not because of his rest, but because no one came to check. The overseers lingered elsewhere, their voices echoing from the wider route as they broke clusters apart and corrected pace.
Lin Shen worked alone, completely ignored.
He shortened his recovery by a few breaths each climb, allowing strain to briefly accumulate before sealing it inward again.
The stones had not grown heavier, and the pressure had not lessened.
But rather the strain no longer tore.
It compacted.
Later in the day, a commotion echoed from above. A sharp reprimand cut through the air, followed by hurried footsteps. Another stone was abandoned partway up the wider path.
No one came looking for Lin Shen.
Work continued until the light began to fade.
When night finally came, food was distributed as usual. Lin Shen received his portion without comment and ate slowly, standing apart from the others. Nearby, an argument erupted over rations, frustration spilling out after days of exhaustion.
The argument ended quickly.
Lin Shen paid it no mind.
Food was not distributed evenly. He observed who received more, who received less, and who was absent altogether. Some initiates ate in silence, eyes lowered. Others glanced around nervously.
The pattern was simple and crude, but it was consistent.
That night, Lin Shen returned to the sleeping hall unnoticed. Bodies settled onto thin mats, some sighing, others staring silently at the ceiling. Lin Shen lay down near the wall, the cold stone pressing against his back.
The ache remained, deep and constant.
But it did not spread.
"So they've given up on that route."
"That's enough."
Most sects functioned in this simple manner, anything loud being corrected, anything obvious controlled and anything quiet being ignored.
Outside, the terraces fell silent one by one. Overseers changed shifts. The system adjusted again, refining over inefficiencies it did not consider important.
It did not notice what it was accommodating.
Lin Shen let the rhythm of his breathing carry him toward rest.
Tomorrow, he would push slightly further.
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