Original Draft Chapter 1

[Here we have what I believe to be the oldest version of the first chapter of the series. be warned that the writing is 3 years old, so it's not the best.]

Shinjuku, Tokyo 2023: 

"I don't get it!" a silver haired girl agonized as she stared at a small chest full of keys. 

The girl was part of a group of 5 attempting an escape room. She did not know anyone else in the room and had simply been assigned to the group since she was by herself. 

One of the other members reread the clue, "The key to the lock is within the small chest, find the lock's key within the chest's shadow." "There's nothing in the shadow, and there are way too many keys, ahh! we'll never be able to try all of them in time," the silver haired girl agonized as she grabbed a key from the chest. 

A twin tailed pink haired girl was repeating the riddle to herself and pondering the solution. Like the silver-haired girl, she came to the escape room by herself and had been placed within the group. At first glance, her attire would suggest she was a Highschool student. She wore an unbuttoned dark grey cardigan, a white dress shirt, red skirt, thigh high white socks, and a pair of red sneakers. She was about 158 cm tall and had large breasts. However, she was a 21-year-old prodigy detective with the police. She chose to mimic the appearance of a schoolgirl, both due to the undercover benefits and her own personal style preferences. 

Her police badge and ID lanyard had been disguised to look like a necklace, with the actual badge and ID safely hidden out of sight between her breasts. Her name was Yuni Futagawa. Yuni then immediately realized the solution and dashed over to the chest. 

She began shuffling through the keys until she found what she had been looking for. "In the chest's shadow, in other words the chest's double," she said as she opened the false bottom of the chest and discovered a silver key and a gold key alongside the next clue. 

Before Yuni had a chance to read the clue, she heard the silver haired girl shout: "Dekimashita!" Yuni turned to look and noticed that the lock had been opened. "Wow! you got it first try, lucky," one the other group members said to the silver haired girl. The silver haired girl giggled as she basked in the praises from the group. Yuni, however, cast a shocked and suspicious gaze on the girl. 

"Impossible, the key is right here there's no way she could have opened that lock normally. Could she be the lockpicker that's been breaking into businesses lately?" Yuni pondered in her mind. 

"Ah there's another room, we'd better hurry before time runs out," said the silver haired girl. Yuni kept a close eye on the silver haired girl for the duration of the game. 

The only notable event that occurred was the silver haired girl failing to open a safe without the combination to complete the game. Yuni managed to open said safe after the group found the clues to the combination. 

As the group went their separate ways, Yuni tailed the silver haired girl and confronted her alone outside the building. "Say, you sure got lucky when it came to unlocking things that required keys, care to explain how you opened them without the keys?" Yuni asked the girl. 

"Eh?" The silver haired girl said as she gave Yuni a confused look. 

"Don't play dumb with me! I know you used lockpicking to open that lock. I know for a fact because I used the real key to confirm that you opened the lock unnaturally," Yuni stated. "Now care to explain who you are?" Yuni said as she pulled her badge out of her breasts and revealed it to the silver haired girl. (637) 

"Heh heh heh," the silver haired girl laughed. "Allow me to introduce myself!" she boldly stated as she reached into her massive breasts and pulled out a card. The card then caught on fire. "Wah! I didn't mean to set it on fire yet!" the silver-haired girl said as she frantically began blowing out the fire. "Ehem, dozo," she said as she handed the slightly charred card to Yuni. 

"The magical witch Gindini-chan?" Yuni gave the silver haired girl an angry and confused look. 

"That's right! I'm the kawaii magician Gindini chan!" the silver haired girl proclaimed as she struck a cute pose. The silver haired girl had straight medium length silver hair and a beautiful figure. Her breasts were so massive they put Yuni's to shame. She looked young and was a few centimeters taller than Yuni, standing at 163 cm tall. She was wearing a t-shirt, skinny jeans, and white sneakers. 

"Yeah, show me your ID or I'm hauling you down to the station here and now," Yuni said angrily. 

"Ehhhh!? but that’s my ID card, right?" the silver-haired girl said with a worried expression. 

Yuni was mentally debating whether this was an act, or if this girl really was as dumb as she was acting. "Photo ID with your name, date of birth, and address," Yuni said. 

"Oh, you mean the card in my wallet. Here you go," the silver haired girl said happily as she handed her ID to Yuni. 

"Madoka Ginkawa, age 19," Yuni read, as she enviously stared at Madoka's massive breasts. "You're younger than me and have those massive watermelons!?" Yuni jealously thought to herself. 

Madoka sensed Yuni's jealousy and snickered as she said, "Daijoubu, you're still in school, so you'll have plenty of time to drink lots of milk imouto chan." 

"I'm older than you watermelon succubus!" Yuni shouted angrily. 

"Ehhh!? You're older than me!? I thought you were some high school detective!" Madoka shouted franticly. 

After calming down, Yuni resumed her interrogation. "Recently, there have been numerous break-ins and theft in the area, you wouldn't happen to know anything would you?" Yuni asked. 

"Ehh!? I'm not a thief, I mean I'm good at breaking out of things because I'm a magician, but I don't steal," Madoka pouted angrily. "Ah, you probably shouldn't hang around me too much, I wouldn't want you to get involved with my problems," Madoka said with a sad look. 

"That statement just made you even more suspicious!" Yuni thought to herself. She decided to end the interrogation, but secretly tail Madoka to discover her motives. "All right you can go, but be careful on your way home," Yuni said. 

Madoka smiled and bowed as she began walking away. "Ginkawa, Ginkawa, isn't that the name of that uber rich family?" Yuni pondered to herself as she tailed Madoka. "If she really is related to THAT Ginkawa family it makes even less sense for her to be a thief, of course she could also be faking her identity." Yuni began running scenarios in her brain while on the train. 

After getting off the train, Yuni continued to tail Madoka. Madoka seemed to have some awareness that she was being watched, as she would nervously stop and look around at times. It took all of Yuni's strength and skill to avoid being spotted. Yuni had tailed Madoka to a quiet street, when suddenly three men jumped out of a black van parked on the street and surrounded Madoka. One of the men put a cloth over Madoka's face as he and the other men began to drag her into the van. 

"Kidnappers!" Yuni screamed in her mind. She quickly began deliberating her best course of action in her mind. 2 seconds later Yuni began charging at the kidnappers while screaming "Kidnappers save me!" at the top of her lungs. 

The three men froze while Madoka continued to struggle. "As I thought, these appear to be low level punks. There are most likely a total of 4 or 5 goons including the driver in that car. The fact that it takes three of them to restrain Madoka means that Madoka must be stronger than her appearance would suggest, and that this kidnapping was most likely planned. Even with my subpar physical strength I should easily be able to incapacitate those three thugs since they've got their hands full. Then I'd only need to worry about someone jumping out from the side or trunk as the driver will stay put to make a clean getaway," Yuni thought to herself as she caught up to the men. 

Before Yuni could attack,"Mmph!" a man grabbed her from behind and put a cloth over her face. "Chloroform!? Shit! Where did he come from!? I didn't see the trunk..." Before she lost consciousness Yuni saw that the driver's seat of the van was empty. "Oh, so that's what happened, shit I screwed up..."