Original Draft Chapter 5 [Final]

Hanabi began curling Madoka's hair around the explosives. Izumi unravled Yuni's hair and began doing the same to her.

Eventually the two girls had their hair rapped up in explosive curlers. Izumi and Hanabi then wheeled two portable hair dryer units behind the restrained girls. Hanabi then began setting up the fuse while Izumi returned to the backroom.

"These should work nicely, Oi Izu you get everything you wanted?" Hanabi shouted to Izumi.

"Izumi has everything she wants," Izumi happily replied as she wheeled a crate full of beauty products.

Izumi then smeared facial cream all over Yuni and Madoka's faces while Hanabi picked up Madoka's phone. "I'll explain the rules for the game. In 2 hours those curlers will blow up. Don't worry they won't kill you, but they might leave you with permanent burns and likely blow off your ears," Hanabi explained.

"MmMmmp! (Oh that sounds LOVELY!" Yuni angrily moaned.

Hanabi resumed her explanation. "All you need to do is break out and cut the wire before time runs out. However, you need to cut both wires within 10 seconds of each other otherwise the other one will go off. Oh you also can't move to far away or fiddle with the bombs in your hair too much, otherwise they'll blow up."

Hanabi then picked up Madoka's phone from the counter handed it to Izumi who positioned it on a faraway counter. "Naturally we'll make sure to record this so the world can see Ms.Majo's great escape or fail," Hanabi said as she prepared to activate the bomb.

"Izumi can't wait to get out of this itchy bald cap," Izumi groaned.

"What!? Don't tell me you thought we'd actually shave all our hair off just to steal some beauty products," Hanabi jeered at Yuni.

"Wait steal? You mean they weren't targeting Madoka?" Yuni thought.

"You two showing up was pure coincidence. When we heard about Madoka's little game, Izumi just couldn't resist playing with you. If only we weren't stealing, we'd haul you back to our hotel room for even more fun," Izumi lamented.

"Well make sure to explain everything to sleeping beauty when she wakes up. Wouldn't want her to screw up and accidently blow you guys up," Hanabi taunted as she activated the bomb and timer. "Just open the back and cut the right wire, I'm sure a genius detective like you knows how to do it, but I don't know about Gin-baka over there," Hanabi said as she picked up the crate and left the salon with Izumi.

Their getaway car was parked right outside the salon. After loading the goods and getting in the car, the two women ripped off their disguises. Long hair came flowing down.

"Eck! Izumi's hair is all sticky. Izumi will have to shower when we get back," Izumi moaned.

"I'm just glad that crazy bitch didn't realize we weren't bald," Hanabi said.

"Hanabi could easily beat her, I mean you had no trouble restraining her just now," Izumi said.

"Hope that bitch is enjoying her hot wax," Hanabi giggled.

About 1 hour had nearly passed since the bomb had been triggered. Madoka finally opened her eyes. She saw her reflection in the mirror and assumed something was wrong. She turned her head to see Yuni in the same state as her in the next chair over. "The hell is Fujiko doing!? What a sore loser," she thought to herself.

She then easily freed her wrists, but before she could do anything else she heard Yuni moaning like crazy.

"MMMMM! MMMM! (Don't leave the chair! We'll blow up if you do!)," Yuni frantically tried to warn her friend of the danger.

Madoka then peeled off the facial mask along with the tape on her mouth. "What's wrong Yuni?" She asked cheerfully.

"MMMMp! MMMM!" Yuni tried her best to explain, but the gag was really doing its job well.

"Shit, I really hope that idiot realizes those are explosives," Yuni thought to herself.

Madoka then noticed the hair dreyer and all the wires connected to the hair curlers in Yuni's hair, and then stared at herself in the mirror before coming to a terrifying realization. "WAH! That bitch put bombs in our hair! Is she insane!?" Madoka yelled out. "Ah Yuni let me free myself and then I'll come get you out," she said as she released the restraints on her ankles.

"MMMMMM! (Don't Move!)" Yuni yelled.

Luckilly Madoka had not moved from the chair. "You're acting like you don't want me to move, Ah! are you trying to say something bad will happen if I move around to much?" asked Madoka.

Yuni gently nodded her head yes.

"Ah I can't reach you with my hand. Oh I know!," Madoka then took off one of her sneakers. Yuni was then staring face to face with Madoka's bare foot.

"Yay my foot can reach, and I didn't leave the chair," Madoka said happily.

Yuni gave Madoka a disgusted look.

"What are you mad about!? My feet are clean and quite pretty you know," Madoka said as she freed one of Yuni's wrists.

Yuni immediatly pulled the mask and tape off her face. "Bleh! There's no time to complain. We need to disarm both bombs within 10 seconds of each other or else we'll get our heads blown off," Yuni explained. "We can't move too far from the chair or fiddle with the bombs in our hair otherwise it'll go off early." Yuni reached into her breast and pulled out a lockpicking tool. "Don't worry I should be able to free myself with this, but don't do anything until I'm free."

"Hai" Madoka sighed in agreement as she put her sneaker back on and relaxed in the chair. "How much time to we have?" she asked Yuni.

"50 minutes give or take," Yuni said as she tried to undo the retraint on her other wrist.

It took Yuni 30 minutes to break free of all her restraints.

"Wow, you'd have had your head and eyebrows shaved off if you participated in my challenge earlier," Madoka taunted.

"Sometimes I hate that gloatfing airhead personality of yours," Yuni retorted.

The two girls then carefully got up and walked behind their chairs to the bomb devices in the dryers. They opened the backs and saw three wires and a pair of wire cutters. "Nice of her to actually provide wire cutters for us," Yuni said.

"What wire are we supposed to cut!?" Madoka cried.

"For this one its the white one, ready on 3, 1, 2, 3!" Yuni and Madoka cut the wires at the same time. Nothing happened. The bomb had been defused with 15 minutes to spare.

The two girls breathed a sigh of relief before frantially removing the explosives from their hair. "Damn, it might actually be faster to just shave all of them off," Yuni grumbled.

"Hell no! I'm not letting that bitch get her way," Madoka retorted.

Yuni then rembered that Madoka didn't know about Izuhana, and was likely blaming Fujiko for the incident.

10 minutes later the girls were bomb free and were rushing into the back room.

"I'm gonna do something humiliating to that hairless bitch!" Madoka huffed.

When they opened the door they found a woman covered head to toe in hot wax. She moaned in distress as Yuni and Madoka attempted to remove the wax. The woman was reavealed to be a nude and pissed off Fujiko explained what happened.

"Those Whores had the gall to restrain me in wax and rob my shop!? "I'm gonna strip and shave those whores balder than bald and ink their entire bodies with the most revolting tattoos immaginable."

Yuni and Madoka shuddered as Fujiko put on a robe and marched out into the main room. There was a dull boom sound and the three girls looked and saw a light purple cream where the bombs had been.

"Are? looks like you two nearly got hit with my nair bombs," Fujiko sneered.

"Wait YOUR nair bombs?" Yuni angrily asked.

"When they explode nair bursts out and destroys all your hair in one go. They're perfect for pranking girls that frequently use hair curlers. Oh don't worry they aren't deadly, at worst they'll destroy all you hair and make your head burn for a bit. Plus they're only 10000 yen for a full pack of 20," she happily explained.

"Why the hell are you even selling something like that... Wait! That means Hanabi never put real explosives in our hair to begin with!" Yuni yelled.

Madoka then noticed her phone on the counter and turned off the video recording. "Wow! I got a lot of content today," Madoka gleefuly said.

"You win this round, but next time you set foot in here I'm shaving you on the spot!" Fujiko yelled angrily.

"Don't worry I'll never come back. Hope you go bankrupt baldy!" Madoka shouted as she left the salon.

Yuni attempted to leave, but Fujiko clamped her hand down on her soldier. "The hell do you think you're going officer!?" She angrily asked. "Proper protocal is to stay, comfort the victim, get testimonies, and shave your head in repentance for allowing me to suffer such humiliation!"

"Screw you! I'm not shaving my head to make you feel better!" Yuni retorted.

Fujiko released her and called someone on her phone. "Moshi mosh! Ah Otoe-san listen, I was held hostage by some criminals and had all my beautiful hair shaved off. Yep I'm completely hairless! No hair no eyebrows no eyelashes. I was so scared. Its all because one of your detectives failed to arrest the criminals when she was here. Ah her name and badge number? I think it was Yuni-chan and her badge-are? She's gone."

Yuni had bolted out of the salon and ran away as far as she could. She then called a coworker to inform them of the situation before deciding to head home and file the report tomarrow. "Ugh first Fujiko then Izuhana I'm too overwhelmed to think properly," she said.

The next day Yuni headed for the station. "Come to think of it who was Fujiko's father again? I'm pretty sure he was some kind of big shot, but I can't quite remember," Yuni pondered as she entered the station.

She then noticed all the female officers and personell glaring angrily at her. "Huh!? Why is everyone looking at me like that? I didn't do anything wrong did I?" Yuni soon got her answer as her superior officer Makoto Kuobane entered the room.

"Yuni Futagawa! Care to explain why the Superintendent ordered all female officers and personell to have their heads shaved smooth within 48 hours!?" she angrily demanded.

Yuni then remembered something important. "Ah that's right. Fujiko's father is the Superintendent of the entire Tokyo Metropolitan Police. I'm Fucked."

[Original Draft End]