A Slice of Life

This is the 1st draft of the plot of Chapter 0. Please leave your thoughts and suggestions in the comments, it will help me immensely in improving the plot.

Chapter 0 | 1st Draft:

2 orphaned toddlers were taken in by a kindly owner of a pizzeria. One grew up to be shy and one much extroverted. Later, when they grew up and the owner grew older, they started managing the shop. The extroverted guy grew up to be great in the front desk, working hard everyday to sell the pies and waiting on the customers, while the introverted guy was great at cooking.

But, one day the owner passed away and his irresponsible and alcoholic brother inherited the store, the introverted guy was fired and kicked out for sucking at interacting with the customers. But as common sense dictates, any restaurant needs both a good cook and a good waiter to be successful, the restaurant closed down soon and the extroverted guy became both homeless and jobless.

Unable to find a suitable place to work, he starts looking for other ways to make money. One day, the extroverted guy is referred by a friend to a audition. He attends it and gets the role and starts working. Enticed by the good pay, he starts attending acting school. Soon he becomes a well-to-do actor but, success doesn't last forever, soon he finds himself unable to land good roles. One day, while working on a badly written sit-com (Original Pizza Brothers Video), he is reminded of his childhood and he wants to go back to his hometown.

However upon reaching his home town he founds that his brother was murdered but, is unable to find much information from the locals. Determined to continue his brother's legacy, to find out the truth behind his murder and to avenge his death, he uses his money to open a new pizza place. But, alas he can't cook and his waiting skills has also become rusty.

The journey of a man to make the best pizza in the world, to learn the truth behind and avenge his brother's murder begins.