Chapter 11:
2 Halves: Beyond The Cosmic Divide
The wagon was twenty feet long, eight feet wide, and seven feet high at its peaked center. Grain knew this because he'd spent the first hour of captivity measuring it with his eyes, cataloging every detail as his father had taught him. Understand your environment first. Everything else follows.
Five wagons total in the convoy. He'd counted them during loading, watching as boys from different Earth settlements were sorted like grain—twenty-three per wagon, organized by height and apparent health. The strongest in the lead wagon, the weakest at the rear. Efficient. Deliberate. Imperial.
The construction was brutally simple: iron bars thick as a man's wrist, spaced just wide enough that a hand could fit through but not a head. The floor was teak planks worn smooth by countless previous occupants, dark with stains that Grain tried not to think about. The roof was the same wood, gaps between planks allowing strips of sky to show through—just enough to track the sun's position, never enough to provide real relief from its heat.
No benches. No buckets. No concessions to human dignity whatsoever.
Twenty-three boys occupied the lead wagon. Grain had secured the back-left corner through a brief, savage confrontation with two older boys—brothers from the northern settlements named Gar and Lok. They'd tried to claim the corner by right of age and size. Grain had responded by placing his back against the junction of the two walls, planting his feet, and simply not moving when they'd tried to shove him aside.
The Bear had pulsed in his chest, a warm, immovable weight. After thirty seconds of pushing against what felt like trying to move a rooted tree, the brothers had given up and claimed spots along the side wall instead.
The corner was survival. It meant you could brace against two solid surfaces when the wagon lurched. It meant your ribs only screamed when the wheels hit rocks, not every time another body collided with yours. It meant you saw everyone coming.
Grain pressed his spine against the wood and took stock of his new world.
The Census of the CageImmediate neighbors:
To his right sat Kiro, pressed against the same back wall. They'd moved together instinctively during loading, staying within arm's reach. Kiro's Sun Eagle marks were still visible on his neck and shoulders, but they looked dimmer now, as if the spirit itself was retreating from this place.
Kiro hadn't spoken since the gates closed. He sat with his knees pulled to his chest, his eyes tracking the Ornix knights outside the bars with the focused intensity of a predator studying prey. Or perhaps prey studying predators. It was hard to tell which.
In front of them, serving as a kind of human buffer, sat Torrent. The massive boy from the Bison Clan had claimed a spot in the wagon's center and simply... existed. His presence was like a boulder in a stream—other boys flowed around him, but none tried to move him. His Bison marks covered both arms from shoulder to wrist, geometric patterns that seemed to pulse with a slow, earthy rhythm.
Torrent's eyes were closed, but Grain could tell he wasn't sleeping. His breathing was too controlled, too deliberate. He was meditating, staying connected to his spirit despite the iron cage and the wheels that severed them from the earth.
The younger ones:
Against the front wall, as far from the gate as possible, huddled a cluster of three boys who'd been crying since the loading began.
Tomas, the potter's son. Ten years old, small for his age, with Badger marks that flickered erratically on his hands. He kept touching his face, as if checking to make sure it was still there. His older brother had been left behind—too young to conscript, too old to bring. Tomas was alone for the first time in his life, and it showed.
Yuki, from the Water techniques family. Thin as a reed, with pale blue Serpent marks spiraling down his left leg. He was eleven but looked eight. He'd been silent during loading, but now he was crying—not sobbing, just silent tears streaming down his face that he made no attempt to wipe away.
Ren, from one of the Crown territories (Wind). His family had been traveling through Kusanti when the conscription order came. Bad luck. He sat with his arms wrapped around his knees, rocking slightly, whispering something that sounded like a prayer or a counting rhyme.
The northern brothers:
Gar and Lok had taken positions along the left wall, still glaring occasionally at Grain. They were fifteen and sixteen respectively—old enough that they should have already completed their spirit trials, but the northern settlements had different customs. Gar's Lynx marks were fully manifested, sharp geometric patterns on his shoulders. Lok's marks were fainter—a Wolf, but barely visible. He was trying to compensate with aggression.
Between them sat Jinn, another northern boy. Quiet. Watchful. His marks weren't visible, which meant either they were on his torso or he hadn't manifested yet. He kept his hands folded in his lap and his eyes on the floor, making himself small.
The middle positions:
Most of the wagon's remaining occupants had clustered near the side walls, forming rough groups based on which settlement they'd come from.
Dante—fourteen, with weak Fire affinity marks on his palms. He'd been conscripted from a village on the Flame border. He sat alone, not quite fitting in with the Earth boys but clearly terrified of the Ornix knights outside. His marks kept pulsing faintly, as if trying to respond to the Flame knights' presence, but they were pale compared to the knights' blazing aura.
Asher—thirteen, sarcastic and sharp-tongued even now. His Hawk marks were on his shoulder blades, hidden beneath his tunic. He'd been making cutting remarks during loading until one of the knights had slammed a gauntleted fist against the bars near his head. He'd been quiet since then, but Grain could see his jaw working, words building up behind his teeth.
Rael—surprising everyone by being present at all. Chief Torun's daughter should have been exempt from conscription, but she'd volunteered. Her Shadow Viper marks coiled elegantly along her right arm, and she sat with her back straight and her expression neutral, as if she were attending a village council meeting instead of being caged like an animal.
When Grain had caught her eye during loading, she'd held his gaze and given the smallest possible nod. We survive this. Together.
The rest were faces Grain recognized but didn't know well. Boys from outlying settlements, younger sons, families he'd seen at festivals but never spoken to. They filled the remaining space, a mass of brown tunics and frightened eyes.
Twenty-three boys total. Twenty-three futures compressed into a box of iron and wood, rolling toward a destination none of them had chosen.
The First HourThe convoy didn't depart immediately after loading. The wagons sat in the clearing outside Kusanti village for nearly an hour while the Ornix knights made final preparations. Twelve knights total, each mounted on a Drake—massive reptilian beasts that were part horse, part lizard, part nightmare.
The Drakes weren't like Earth Territory's spirit animals. There was no bond, no partnership. These were tools. Weapons. They wore iron barding on their chests and heads, and their eyes held no intelligence, only hunger barely restrained by their riders' control.
Ser Victus rode at the convoy's head on a Drake named Cinder. The beast was larger than the others, its scales deep crimson that faded to black at the extremities. Smoke curled from its nostrils with each breath, giving it a perpetual look of barely contained rage.
Victus himself was everything the boys had been taught to fear about Flame nobility. Tall. Sharp-featured. His armor was black obsidian inlaid with channels of amber that pulsed with inner light. His Lightning affinity marks were visible on his neck and hands, brilliant electric blue against his pale skin. He sat his Drake with the casual confidence of someone who'd never encountered a problem he couldn't burn or shock into submission.
He addressed them once before departure.
"You are cargo," he said, his voice carrying easily across the clearing. "High-value cargo, yes, but cargo nonetheless. The Emperor has commissioned your delivery to Camp Infernus. I intend to deliver you. What condition you arrive in is entirely dependent on how much trouble you cause during transport."
He gestured to the wagons with one gloved hand. "The journey will take eighteen days. Possibly twenty if weather intervenes. You will be provided water twice daily and food once daily. These provisions are calculated to keep you alive and functional. They are not calculated to keep you comfortable. If you have complaints about the accommodations, I encourage you to voice them. I will then explain, in terms you understand, why your comfort is irrelevant to your purpose."
A pause. The boys were silent, waiting.
"Two rules," Victus continued. "First: No escapes. Anyone who attempts to flee will be executed immediately. Their body will be left for scavengers as a reminder to the others. Second: No rebellion. Anyone who attacks a knight or damages Imperial property will be executed. Slowly."
He smiled then—a thin, sharp expression that didn't reach his eyes.
"Beyond that, you're free to organize your cage time however you wish. Fight. Pray. Cry. I don't care. Just ensure you're alive and able to walk when we reach Camp Infernus. Dismissed."
He wheeled Cinder around without waiting for acknowledgment. A moment later, the convoy lurched into motion.
The First MovementThe sensation of movement after an hour of stillness was disorienting. The wagon jolted forward, and every boy who wasn't braced against a wall was thrown off balance. Bodies collided. Someone's elbow caught Grain in the ribs. Tomas yelped as he was crushed between two older boys.
Grain pressed harder against his corner, using the Bear's stability to anchor himself while chaos erupted around him. After thirty seconds, the initial panic subsided. Boys found positions—some sitting, some kneeling, everyone trying to minimize contact with their neighbors while maximizing their own space.
The wheels found their rhythm. Thump-thump. Thump-thump. Thump-thump.
It was the sound that would define their existence for the next weeks. The endless, grinding rhythm of iron-rimmed wheels over packed dirt roads. Sometimes it changed pitch when the road surface changed. Sometimes it stuttered when they hit rocks. But it never stopped.
Thump-thump. Thump-thump. Thump-thump.
Grain closed his eyes and tried to connect with the Bear. The spirit was there, but distant, as if the iron bars had created a barrier between them. He could feel its presence like a weight in his chest, but the usual clarity of their meditation was muddied, filtered through layers of steel and suffering.
Endure, the Bear whispered. Not advice. A statement of fact. This is what we do.
The First HierarchyWithin the first three hours, the social order had begun to establish itself.
At the top were the older, stronger boys. Gar and Lok, by virtue of age and aggression, claimed authority over the northern cluster. Rael held similar authority over her group, though hers was based on respect rather than fear. Torrent didn't claim anything, but his sheer presence meant the space around him was respected.
Grain occupied a strange middle position. He held the most advantageous spot in the wagon, but he hadn't claimed it through aggression or intimidation. He'd simply... not moved. Not yielded. The other boys weren't sure what to make of that, so they gave him a wary respect.
At the bottom were the youngest ones. Tomas, Yuki, Ren. And Dante, who was older but isolated by his Flame marks. These boys had no protection, no leverage. They survived by staying small and quiet, hoping not to draw attention.
The first conflict came three hours into the journey.
Tomas, overcome by heat and fear and the constant jostling, vomited. It wasn't much—he'd barely eaten that morning—but in the enclosed space, the smell was overwhelming.
"Gods damn it!" Lok snarled, shoving himself away from the spreading puddle. "Keep your sickness to yourself, mud-blood!"
Tomas started crying harder, trying to wipe up the vomit with his tunic.
"Leave it," Grain said quietly. Not loudly. Not aggressively. Just... firmly.
Lok turned to glare at him. "What did you say?"
"Leave it," Grain repeated. "He's ten years old. It's the first day. He'll learn."
"He's making the whole cage stink—"
"So are you," Asher interjected from his position near the front wall. "At least he has an excuse. What's yours?"
Gar started to rise, his hand moving toward Asher, but Torrent shifted. Just slightly. Just enough that his bulk blocked the direct path. The message was clear: You want to start something, you go through me first.
Gar sat back down.
The moment passed. The tension didn't.
But the first norm had been established: The strong don't prey on the weak. Not yet, anyway. Not on the first day.
The First WaterThe call came two hours before sunset: "WATER!"
A knight Grain would come to know as Ser Varus rode alongside the wagon, his Drake keeping perfect pace with the rolling wheels. He was younger than Victus, maybe mid-twenties, with sharp aristocratic features and eyes that held a perpetual expression of amused disdain.
Behind him rode a conscripted servant—an Earth-born man, older, his face carefully blank—carrying a large leather water skin and a long-handled ladle.
"The Emperor provides," Varus announced, his voice pitched to carry over the wagon's rumble. "One ladle per head. Don't spill it."
The servant approached the bars, thrust the ladle through the gaps. He aimed for approximately where Gar sat, tilted the ladle, and poured.
Half the water splashed across Gar's chest and face. The other half hit the wooden floor, immediately absorbed by the thirsty planks or running between the cracks.
Gar tried to catch what he could in his cupped hands, licking desperately at his wet palms.
The servant moved to the next position. Poured again. More spillage. More desperation.
By the time he'd worked his way through all twenty-three boys, maybe half of them had gotten actual water in their mouths. The rest got damp fabric and wet hands to suck on.
Grain, in his corner position, had been one of the last served. He'd watched the pattern, calculated the angle. When the ladle came through the bars near him, he didn't cup his hands. He opened his mouth wide and positioned his head directly beneath the flow.
He got maybe three swallows. Lukewarm, mineral-heavy water that tasted of leather and sweat. But it was liquid, and his throat was already starting to crack from the dry heat.
Behind him, Kiro got maybe one swallow. The rest splashed onto his shoulder and ran down his back.
"Next water call in twelve hours," Varus announced. "Ration your moisture accordingly."
The wagon continued rolling.
Thump-thump. Thump-thump. Thump-thump.
The First BreadAs the sun touched the horizon, turning the sky the color of old blood, the call came again: "RATIONS!"
This time it was a different knight—Ser Balen, thick-necked and scarred, who looked like he'd eaten raw conscripts for breakfast and found them lacking. The same servant rode behind him, this time carrying a canvas sack.
"One portion per head," Balen announced. "Eat it or don't. There's no seconds."
The servant reached into the sack and began pulling out lumps of something that might charitably be called bread. Each piece was roughly fist-sized, a pale gray-brown color, harder than the wooden planks they sat on.
He passed them through the bars with the same careless efficiency as the water—sometimes the boys caught them, sometimes they bounced off the bars or hit the floor.
Grain caught his portion and immediately understood the challenge. The bread wasn't just stale—it was dessicated, baked until all moisture had been removed to extend its shelf life. Biting it directly would break teeth. Even trying to gnaw it was nearly impossible without saliva to soften it first.
The younger boys tried anyway. Tomas bit down hard, yelped, and started crying again as pain shot through his jaw. Yuki just held his portion and stared at it, defeated before he'd even tried.
Grain watched Torrent. The big boy had placed his bread in his mouth without biting, just letting it sit there, slowly softening with what little saliva his body could produce.
Smart.
Grain did the same, positioning the bread against his cheek like a lump of chewing tobacco. It tasted of nothing—just flour and time. But gradually, painfully slowly, it began to soften.
Kiro noticed what they were doing and followed suit. Then Rael. Then others.
But several boys, overwhelmed by hunger and frustration, tried to chew immediately. The wagon filled with the sounds of groaning and cursing as jaws protested and teeth ached.
"New norm," Asher said quietly, his own bread positioned in his cheek. "Let it soak first. Pass it on."
The word spread through the wagon in whispers. By the time the sun had fully set, most boys had figured it out. But Grain noticed that Dante—isolated by his Flame marks—was still trying to gnaw his portion, not having received the advice. His jaw was moving stiffly, painfully.
Grain caught his eye, gestured to his own cheek, mimed waiting. Dante watched for a moment, then nodded and copied the technique.
A small moment. A tiny kindness.
But Grain filed it away. This one can learn. This one adapts.
The First NightDarkness fell like a hammer.
There were no lanterns, no fires. The convoy traveled through full night, the knights navigating by moonlight and the faint bioluminescent glow of their Drake's eyes. Inside the wagon, the bars cast shadows that moved with the swaying motion, creating a disorienting pattern of darkness and less-darkness.
Boys tried to sleep. It was nearly impossible.
The wagon never stopped its rhythm. Thump-thump. Thump-thump. Every rock in the road transmitted up through the wooden floor, jarring bodies that couldn't find comfortable positions. Twenty-three boys breathing in an enclosed space created a humid, suffocating atmosphere despite the gaps in the roof.
And the sounds.
Crying. Always crying. Tomas sobbed openly now that darkness provided some cover. Others cried silently, their shoulders shaking in the dim moonlight. A few boys talked in whispers—prayers, memories, desperate plans that all dissolved into the reality of iron bars and armed knights.
Grain didn't sleep. He sat in his corner, his eyes adjusted to the darkness, and watched.
He watched Gar and Lok conferring in whispers, their heads close together. Planning something. An escape, probably. Or a challenge to the emerging hierarchy.
He watched Rael sitting perfectly still, her eyes closed but her breathing too controlled for sleep. Meditating. Staying connected to her Viper spirit despite the cage.
He watched Torrent, who seemed to have achieved actual sleep despite the conditions. The big boy's breathing was deep and even, his bulk providing stability in the chaos.
He watched Dante, alone near the side bars, his Fire marks pulsing faintly in the darkness as if responding to the volcanic heat that was steadily increasing.
And he watched Kiro beside him, staring at nothing with eyes that reflected the moonlight like a predator in the jungle.
"I'm going to kill them," Kiro whispered suddenly. His voice was flat, matter-of-fact. "Victus. Varus. All of them. I don't know when. I don't know how. But I'm going to kill them."
Grain didn't respond immediately. He let the words hang in the darkness, let Kiro hear them echo in the enclosed space.
Finally: "Later."
"What?"
"Kill them later," Grain said quietly. "First, we survive. We get strong. We learn. And then, when we're ready, we make them pay for every indignity. Every humiliation. Every boy they broke."
Kiro was silent for a long moment. Then: "You mean that?"
"Every word."
"How do you stay so calm?"
Grain looked at his hands in the darkness. His Bear marks were faintly visible, a warm orange glow in the shadows.
"I'm not calm," he said. "I'm just... present. The Bear teaches endurance. Not patience. Not forgiveness. Just the ability to stand and take it until the moment comes to move."
He looked at Kiro. "Your Eagle teaches speed. Precision. The killing strike when the opportunity presents itself. But you can't strike yet. The moment isn't here."
"So I just... wait?"
"We wait. We watch. We remember every face, every cruelty, every crime." Grain's voice was still quiet, but there was iron beneath it now. "And we build a ledger. When the time comes to collect, we'll know exactly what we're owed."
Kiro nodded slowly. "A ledger of rage."
"A ledger of justice," Grain corrected. "Rage is random. Justice is deliberate."
The wagon continued its relentless rhythm through the darkness.
Thump-thump. Thump-thump. Thump-thump.
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