I truly enjoyed reading about the adventures of Dorian and Avery. I found most intereactions with Dorian especially to be hugely entertaining. I thought the world of Lugus was well crafted and interesting. I mean who would have thought that a society would actually not want many technological advances and be happy with that? I would have loved to see more about Avery after sending Dorian off and about what his life was like in the dome. Otherwise I truly enjoyed the story, well done!