First great job. I enjoyed the story because of my past military knowledge. So many of the descriptions of Lt. With their trimmed mustashes and even the way that the characters interacted reminded me of past experiences of my own. That being said, I am left with a ton of questions after finishing this piece. Questions about the infected and even about the MC herself. I assume based on the ending that there will be a sequel and I look forward to maybe having some of these questions answered. The only bit of critique that I have for the writer is to may break up longer paragraphs into more digestable smaller ones. Certain parts of the story would have been so much easier to get through if the paragraphs had just been a bit shorter. Over all, good work!