Mario Nakano 64
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May 12, 2025
A great premise sadly limited by burnout

If you're a writer on this site or any site trying to get their novel published, this story will instantly resonate with you the moment you read the first chapter. From there, the wacky world and meta humor keeps you fastened in your seat, until the latter half of the story. Sadly, this is where burnout rears it's ugly head and the quality diminishes. It's a shame due to just how enjoyable the story is, but with this only being the 1st volume and the potential for more, I'm hopeful that this story will eventually manage to get the perfect 5/5 it's capable of getting.

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