Fight for you
Fight for you
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May 06, 2025
A28,108words
Mario Nakano 64
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May 07, 2025
A good premise that falls short of it's full potential

A human girl and a 3ft tall goblin man getting together sounds like the recipe for a unique and enjoyable premise. That most certainly is the case, however, the story fails to live up to it's full potential. While the finale is at least satisfactory, things really do feel rushed towards the end. Still, for what it was, it was a very enjoyable read.

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