Author Moon is an excellent story-teller
I came in expecting to read about Amako’s story, but Author Moon, in the voice of Amako, narrated it in a way that it showed the story of a lot of characters as well

As mainly a first person writer as well, I find that Author Moon is able to write in such a way that there is not a lot of “I”, “me”, type of wording and leading sentences. This is a skill of an experienced author. There is a lot to learn from Moon’s writing style.

Very good action scenes as well. In particular the one after Amako found out that some things aren’t happening as per game, (tho possible, as stated). As that showed her quick thinking to adjust. I feel that the ending fight/showdown could’ve been more chunky.

The formatting is also easy on the eyes, btw.

So, main character wise ✅ i am quite contented with Amako
supporting character wise ✅ i like Tyffeon and Timoria. I like that he gave her a necklace at the end, in his tsun as way
Isekai wise ✅ it feels like a new world yes!
Resolution was hmmm I can say passing ✅ but I needed more, which probably is a word count thing, and a good thing itself in saying I am a reader who got hooked.

This book has more to go, keep writing it Moon