Thank you writing SunFic Mara ♥️in fact thank you for coming into my life.
Mara is an author who cares for each and every of her characters. Rina is the MC but each of those around her has their own life going as well. That's how much consideration and thought an author like Mara thinks for her creation and readers like me get to enjoy very well written characters we can support.
I'd like to see where each of the main cast go from now as well.
I love how even if Mara intentionally avoided the gore bits of war, the feeling and tension is still there.
I teared up towards the end as I was stressed that the characters I've grown to like could be hurt but she didn't do that.
Points I would've wanted to see is:
More fantasy.
Maybe some more misunderstanding or drama within the group that could be later solved.
It is my comfort book so I felt comfy and happy with everything. Just an idea in case you wanted to stress me out (take me on a ride)😆
Writing wise, Mara’s style is easy to follow. Emotions are relayed to the readers effectively.
Thank you for inspiring me Mara I will follow you forever
Mai