I am a sobbing mess right now as I type this.
Raaaaaa
Feel my raw emotion!!!

Where do I start?
Very good Main Characters
Very good main leads
Very good supporting characters
Very good plot twist
Very good another mini twist at the last sentence
Very good plot idea
Very good showmanship of growth amongst the 2 MCs

I did not expect to be crying like I am now but here we are. I am sincerely moved.

I wish you took the time to make everything beautiful and presentable.
Your punctuations are fine more or less. The description of places, also fine. Setting the scene is also good.
But just the formatting looks like it was just slapped there. I know it isn’t, why would I still be crying 5 minutes in into writing this otherwise.

I have given my book my all. It is at the maximum / full potential it could be for the time we are all given.

BUT YOUR BOOK IS STILL BETTER THAN MINE.

That’s the highest compliment I could give you. No matter how hard I worked, your book is just better. The moral lesson, the solid characters (and you have a lot), the delivery, the emotions. I hate to think you wont be in the top 10 cause of your lousy formatting when you could’ve easily be one of the best (in my eyes you’re currently top 1)

I will make fan art for you when I get the chance or maybe after the results are out, so we don’t accidentally “edit”

Good job Author H Shura ~ you’ve captured my mythical heart