I wish it was longer. Very good execution of harem. Very good execution of system things (like the lights on the top of the head). Kael was a very stand out character. Rika is a good mc. Not the typical ‘please sweep me off my feet’ girl. This is a book I would buy. As much as I like Dryden and have done a fanart of him, I think the more realistic ending is achieved. I like how the ending is Rika looking up at the skies and wondering.

Pacing and writing is all very good. Easy to understand and follow