The story is succinct and interesting. Initially, I guessed from the title and the tags that it would go nowhere—be more of the author’s diary. However, that wasn’t the case. Instead, it’s a look into the psyche of the diary owner in the story, a warped and messed-up individual. As the story unfolds, we get more and more information about them until it comes to a well-written and hard-hitting resolution.

The story meanders occasionally, and has a few typos that specifically make the meaning of sentences confusing. The idea also feels a little like it’s edgy for the sake of being edgy. However, I still enjoyed reading it.