A quick read with very immersive prose. I'd say it could definitely be lengthened and slowed down a bit, because the writing pulled me in easily and I wanted more of it. Maybe call back to the worldbuilding later on? I loved how it panned out, but felt like it ended a little too quickly. Honestly, this warrants a novel that's full of situations like this, which I'd really love to read. Great one-shot story!