Lil bro Navi is an honest and hardworking author.
Every step of the way, Navi asked for advice from honeyfeed community and as a reader of final login, I was able to see the changes and growth of his work.

Navi’s plot is already there, just needing to have the “novel” approach to things and this is very evident on his recent chapters. The ending made me teary as I thought Kyou deserves better, but the ending sentence /paragraph also confuses me a bit.

The cover photo also shows a genki Ayane. I actually dont think I’ve felt a happy free genki type of vibes from her when reading. I thought ayane was like erza from fairy tale, so I dont see her smiling like that in the cover photo.

I can feel Navi’s emotions and care for his creation and his world. The power system is also something I find fascinating. It’s hard to come up with those.

All in all, I respect Navi as an author and would expect more things from you