I started this out a while back and got to it just recently I suppose. Slow reading is my jam so to speak. I loved the mystery aspect of the series that kept you guessing, cliffhanger upon cliffhanger, chapter after chapter. I can't say there were any in-depth character moments that truly left me in awe, what I would say is that distinction in who each person is rather clear and not to be debated on what each person is doing at any given time.

Same can't be said for the structure and general flow of some parts of the chapters. Sometimes you would feel the concerning urge to restructure certain parts of a scene or dialogue flow to understand a bigger picture for something that didn't need be. This would be considered rare if there was more of the story to go one but in it's short run it happened quite a bit. I could say it's a quirk of mine just in this case though.

Also, I think it could have done with a bit more editing just to check if everything was put in their place as explained before. I think the potential was there, would've definitely loved to see more despite it's flaws.