My first review, hope it's not too clunky

This is a confusing story, in a good way. As a reader I had an intriguing, mind boggling read.

From a writing standpoint the establishing of the tone and atmosphere is well done. I find stories of similar concepts easy to mess up if the focus lingers on the atmosphere or philosophical aspects for too long making the story too long or too short for its own good, but the author avoids that hurdle, giving the story as a whole a suitable length without compromising quality.

Over all a well executed, engaging short story. Keep up the good work!