first of all, its a shame you didnt make the dates.

Your format here is impeccable and very easy on the eyes. The pacing is lovely. This is perfect for a novella. Just the right amount of drama to keep everything moving forward.

I should have known author Shura is one for giving the wildest plot twists. I forgot about that.

Character wise:
I couldnt help but project a bit to Aria 🫡☺️😩😂 but Aria is complete as is, actually. i feel that she’s a complete human on her own. i do understand the complacency. one does tend to let their own family off. even if its huge misdemeanour.
Rina is a very good supporting character. i love how she’s ALWAYS there huehuehuehue
John is a sexy man. aria i get it.

author shura had made characters i can easily imagine as real life people.

I love how the spicy scenes are made with level 1 chili level. not very spicy. just enough to relay intention. very very very well intentioned writer who selects the right words.

keen to see more of Vince lol 😂

i love how the ending is where John always wanted to go. and the puzzles.all meaningful.

we never saw the mystery man that is AL lol 😂

all in all, ever since the release of cover photo, i thought Aria was my type of cosplaying heheheheheheh so its good to have characters like this that are achievable for a lot of readers to dress up as :3

im trying to think of the lesson learned in this story, so ill come back to this review, but sometimes, it doesnt have to be morally inclined the whole time (thats a me thing unfortunately). this has been a very very enjoyable read.

(I CANT WAIT TO CHANGE AND EDIT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA)
good job Author Shura 🚁