One thing I have always liked about Joker’s writing is that the MC had always been within my definition of “relatable” mc. (Redacted name) here is also relatable in my books, much as Hikaru was (isekai protagonist; reminder to a certain author who forgot his own mc omg 😂😂)

The supporting cast 🍋🍋were also rich in personality and not just random folks standing behind (redacted)-kun.

i like how some of the chapters were alternating between good stuff and sad stuff. shows the up and down of human life.

a comment i could agree on was the pace or the story outline lets go of our hands and we get lost trying to connect it back, but the ending is ominous actually and makes me think that there’s a lot more story to be told.

overall a great improvement in writing style. i am invested to know more of (redacted)kun’s story