Austin H
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Feb 10, 2026
Troubled, but messed up enough to sell itself

So, You folks struggled with the prompt, and I feel like you didn't quite get what you were passed. You went a delightfully disturbed place, but it's not the assignment. In terms of horror, though, it was solid enough, and you worked some terrible imagery into the otherwise psychological work.

There were times when I felt like the team was spinning its wheels, though, as though the 1600 per person, three people, was a little much for what the story really wanted.

Sorry for the short review, but this is the last Chunin story I've gotten to so my "notes to self" are a little sparse given that I won't have to refer to this.

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