Serapiii
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May 09, 2026
A simple concept with great execution

I’m a fan of stories that that have a specific time limit with a coherent timeline already set in stone. The emotional parts of the plot hit hard and I Ioved the execution of the 4th wall breaks and inner character monologues. The slice of life scenes felt kind of long but I still enjoyed it because it made me appreciate Yua and Tsubasa’s relationship even more. I don’t really find 4th wall breaks being handled in this kind of format or spacing so it was fun to read.

I also wish the story was a bit longer but it is already great for what it is as a psychological horror. I like how simple but experimental some of the concepts were. Tsubasa and Yua were very interesting characters. I will remember that they lived. Thank you for your hard work and congrats on finishing!

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