In his journal (which is written suspiciously like a light novel), Mizuhara Kohei reflects on his three years at Kitazawa High: A typical public school, or so he says.
Enduring run-in after run-in with a host of bizarre girls, boys, teachers and even a classist academic system, Kohei’s adventure sees him pushed to the limit—not just in terms of mental fortitude, but also his sanity as he tries to play the straight man in a school populated by attractive lunatics.
So begins the story of a love triangle of an ordinary boy, his enigmatic senior and his cutesy childhood friend.
So begins the story of a story ostensibly focused on writing, only to end up with a whodunnit situation where Kohei finds himself the target of a mysterious figure hellbent on expelling him.
Prompt: Impossible Romance
Theme(s): #Comedy #Harem #Drama
My theme(s): #Seinen #Psychological
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Prompt: Impossible Romance
Theme(s): #Comedy #Harem #Drama
My theme(s): #Seinen #Psychological
Why I Write is finally finished! If you have any thoughts on the novel that you want answered (in a more direct way than just writing a comment), feel free to DM me on...
A normal government school you say? No plot twists?? 😅 Alright, I'm trusting you then!
I love the way that you write for several reasons but I think the biggest one is that I know I would recognize your work anywhere. Even if one day I randomly found a published book of yours without your name on it I would likely be swearing to myself that you were the one who wrote it. In short, you have a very distinct writing style. 😊
I'm curious about this story so far. Thank you for sharing and I hope you're having a nice day! ❤️
Is it really a harem rom com if the MC doesn't see the heroins comically naked at least once?
Oh god it is the most enjoyable light novel I've read at this site mostly thanks to your references and also because of I can understand your references now Im really , really proud of having over 1000 hours of anime (without wishing to boast but I did it without watching long animes like naruto , one piece etc.) anyway I appreciate you <3
Read in one day, it’s something about comedy romances I enjoy…anyways well done. I could see some parallels from other shows and it took a nice different direction all of a sudden I’d been cool with just the harem troll route and the dialogue is really engaging. I hope to write something as captivating as this at some point. The only thing, THE ONLY THING, I’d say was sometimes the dialogue got confusing on who said what and the setting wasn’t super clear but it’s a journal in the style of a light novel so it could be mere stylistic choice. If there’s a 2nd volume, that’s be great to read but it’s a lot of work for free lol
I like the whole take on the jab of the harem culture, it's quite funny and they all have distinct personalities. It does read like an anime type of text and the dialogue is great. Some lines can get confusing with the placement of it all, but I suspect this being due to its a journal entry of a guy. It reminds me of Oreigaru.
Well, so I awoke from my slumber. I finally found time to... err... Live for a bit, and decided to spend it reading Why I Write.
And I don't regret it in the slightest.
While my free time is not abundant nowadays and I fear I may not be able to give you the long review you deserve, I hope that just reiterating how much I've enjoyed the story and characters is enough.
One example I consider worth noting is how Kohei's opinion of Mari seems to change very frequently, even if not in a very important manner for the most part, that constant back and forth in Kohei's perception of her is something I immensely appreciate since I haven't seen it done much before in this genre, and I feel it is very appreciated. As much as I am terrible at trying to explain it.
For now, that is all. Thank you for the amazing story you gave us, and cheers for what will come next. I am dying to be there since day one.
Kind regards,
A fan of yours.
I really am sorry that I was the cause for such misunderstanding, it was also very much my fault. My deepest apologies.
>It really felt like the time I tried to offer critique swaps on a web novel site.
Think I've heard this before, but can't remember.
I was highly amused by the chapter. I found it very witty and I gotta say that you handle fourth wall breaking in a very stylistic way. That's a very hard thing to pull off in my opinion so nice work as always! 😊