Renew

In a future on scale so far from our own resides a young man, named Giovanni. He is living on an earth where humanity lives under glass domes. Everyday is mundane for Giovonni, only the singing of his piano and the occasional nag from a now distant friend relish mere moments in his life. Until one day, during a piano recital, a dome shatters above him. Now a pale white being emerges into the conscious mind of Giovonni, yet he does not feel fear. This being is human like, has human desires and wants to live life beyond a microscope with no other than Giovonni. Drawn to his music he wants to escape the confines of his current status of lab-rat and Giovonni never having feelings such as this before inquire one another on a journey. Unveiling the underbelly of a project hidden from society, finding the true intentions of a
company's actions for the sake of Renew.

I would love any critiques of my writing as I'm still learning and I have Dysgraphia (difficulty converting the sounds of language into written form, may also struggle to form written sentences with correct grammar and punctuation, with common problems including omit...