A chance to become God

The world changed when planet sized spheres known as Astea suddenly appeared above major cities around the world. People are disappearing for a brief period and come back with supernatural abilities, but some have yet to return.

Ito Kuro is up at night reminiscing about his childhood friend Hayashi Shiro, who suddenly went missing one day. When Kuro wakes up, he finds himself in an unfamiliar place, along with people he recognizes. There, a creature called Servant greets them and says that they have met the requirements to become God.

This is my first draft that I've actually written down. It is a draft written on the spot so don't expect a decent quality piece of work.

Please give as much feedback as possible as I wish to improve my writing and expand my creativity.

This is my first draft that I've actually written down. It is a draft written on the spot so don't expect a decent quality piece of work.

Please give as much feedback as possible as I wish to improve my writing and expand my creativity.

Author
GenreActionMagicSurvivalSupernatural
UpdatedJun 30, 2022
Chapters2
Writing StatusOngoing
Word Count1,188
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