Sep 17, 2021
I like the characters; they're separate enough from each other although they could use more fleshing out; perhaps that would happen later on in the story? The main character's indifference leads to a nice fencepost seat between the factions. The wording is nice; it's great to see some vocabulary usage here. The sentence structure could use more active, shorter sentences. Having the two main characters who are women be among the most powerful is a nice touch. I wanted to read more after the ending. It would be better to have some of the "mysteries" discovered in this series, because as a series it hints at a better story, but that better story doesn't come. Overall I really liked it and kept reading until the end, so it was interesting.
