Sep 24, 2021

Honestly, I think Karin rejoining her team so quickly was a bit of a wasted opportunity to have her angst about it. Given her self doubt and her realizations over the past several days, I don't think that she'd be so easily swayed like that. I would've liked to see her umm and err for several days.

I like her team too. They're fun.

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Sep 24, 2021

You definitely shine during fight scenes. The action is wonderfully described and just reading it makes me feel excited. I can feel the tension Aka is experiencing. The dialogue all flows really well and enhances the scene.

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Sep 24, 2021

Trans magical girl? Can I get a based?

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Sep 24, 2021

It's the whole superhero using inhuman powers to beat up petty criminals and perpetuating a cycle of crime and poverty rather than actually doing anything to make the world better. The Batman just beating up homeless people rather than investing his money into the city or paying taxes. So in this case we have this magical girl who still operates on something of a childlike morality, where "the bad guys" get defeated. Except now she's an adult and has to reckon with what her actions against normal people accomplish.

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