I'm a 18 year old boy trying to write decent readable short form novels. Any criticism is great, as it will make my writing even better if I get more comments. Hope everyone, that deserves it is having a nice day inshallah.

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Things about me: Asian (Chinese), Libra (Oct 15.)
Current Writing Project: That One Fan
(Treating everyone with some love with a 👍)
I do watch anime, but I mostly read manga now as I'm much more busy than when I was young.

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Discord - れん#4909
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