Jun 16, 2024
To:Bubbles
Hello Bubbles,
I appreciate your comment and critique. To be completely honest, I wasn't expecting this to get that far in the competition. I just happen to come across the competition as I was studying and said, "sure, why not?" I will admit after pondering on the story, it can use a bit of work. I did write it in one sitting and after thinking about it, you are right about the sudden tone and shift at the end. I wouldn't call this a shitpost but more of a one pump chump story. If that makes sense. But I completely understand why shitpost would be appropriate in this case. If you are also in the competition, I wish you good luck and hope you do get far into it.
Thanks,
Kae
