Jun 25, 2023
To:Syed Al Wasee
Nothing too major, just paragraph 3 and 7. I think for paragraph 3, you can reword that just a tad bit to make it a little clearer for the reader. And then for paragraph 7, it was a little bit of a tongue twister. Nothing wrong with that, it would just be a bit easier to read if you fixed it a little bit.