Jul 23, 2024
To:Kirb
Hey Kaabii,
I appreciate your output. I was having trouble with this part, not knowing exactly how to open the story. I have rewritten it at least 4 times already. Although I wouldn't like to use this as an excuse, English is not my first language, so there are times where I struggle or I use google translator, and I know that google is not the most reliable tool, so I try to use it only in certain situations. I would take a look at all your suggestion in detail and work on this chapter to try and make it better :)
