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Lover of banter, quips, and characters I probably shouldn’t be attached to.
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Jun 10, 2022
Oh my goodness what a cliffhanger! Another wonderfully paced chapter as well. I felt like you wrote just the right amount of descriptors to make me visualize everything and capture the feelings as well without it ever getting stale or too much. Looking forward to the next chapter! ^^
I absolutely adore this perspective you've brought here, not just the idea itself which is refreshing but also in how it's delievered. I also felt like this was the perfect length for a start because it left me wanting to read more which is great too. I am very interested to see where the story will go from here and to learn about the main character's past and how they got to this point.
Thank you for sharing your work with us! 😊
Jun 09, 2022
I am very curious to learn more about this world! I'm also very empathetic to a broken machine (my car once broke down while driving it! ^^") so I was relieved he had some help, especially in such an unforgiving place! I am attached to this "white haired man" already. ♡
Hope you're having a nice day :)
I absolutely love the wit and energy in this story! Thank you for sharing and I look forward to reading more! :)
Jun 08, 2022
I very much enjoyed the world building in this and thought it was a very captivating starting chapter. I look forward to reading more, thank you for sharing! :)
To:Wortal
Thank you very much for your kind comment it made me so happy to read it. :) haha! Glad to have caught you a bit off guard with that but I am also glad that there is no plot twist in that regard because... I get scared writing horror sometimes. lol Hope you're having a nice day!